evilscycle Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Lore:Known as "Pirate Empress" and "Snake Princess" of Amazon Lily, "Boa Hancock" has fallen in love with "Monkey D. Luffy" revealing her soft side. Those who fall in love with "Boa Hancock" are vulnerable to a range of techniques used by the Devil Fruit "Mero Mero No Mi" which turns people into stone. Don't know how to do the lore :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Well J-Max would be all over this pic lol Pirate isn't a real type. "Pirate" will be fine if you come up with some support for her, since she's just a Vanilla (a Normal Monster). Stats seem fine for a Level 5.The description is good and has no grammmatical errors, but it could be better. Maybe something about her Devil Fruit powers? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Well... [interesting] picture... Sometimes, I find that Level 5's usually have from 2300 to 1800 ATK points, so maybe it's a mite underpowered. Good card though. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilscycle Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Well J-Max would be all over this pic lol Pirate isn't a real type. "Pirate" will be fine if you come up with some support for her' date=' since she's just a Vanilla (a Normal Monster). Stats seem fine for a Level 5.The description is good and has no grammmatical errors, but it could be better. Maybe something about her Devil Fruit powers? 8/10[/quote'] Yeah im gunna do that :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Since you added more to the text, here's a grammar fix:"Known as "Pirate Empress" and "Snake Princess" of Amazon Lily, Boa Hancock has fallen in love with Monkey D. Luffy, thus revealing her soft side. Those instantly infatuated by Boa Hancock's irresistible charm become vulnerable to the vast range of techniques she has mastered after eating the Devil Fruit "Mero Mero No Mi", the "Love-Love Fruit", which instantly turns victims to stone." As for Luffy, here's the OCG fix:"For every card with "Straw Hat" and "Boa Hancock" in its name on the field or in the Graveyard, this card gains 150 ATK. Decrease this card's ATK by 50 for every card in your hand." I honestly don't see the point of decreasing its ATK after you used all that effort to increase its ATK. Try something else other than stat gain/loss. Or just edit the effect a bit more to make it more interesting. As for the Pirate-Type, maybe make some cards that specifically support Pirates? It would give the type purpose. Good for a new member.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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