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snaggles4444

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No attached files please.

 

In my opinion, the picture, name and effect are not creative at all. Your card is like a dried out hamburger. Put some ketchup in it.

 

OCG fixes:

When needs to be capitalized.

Life Points needs to be capitalized.

Add a comma after destroyed.

Plus many more.

 

Keep trying. 4/10.

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