First trap

[justynandtony]

This is my first trap card.......I want feedback....

[The_Duck]

Stop posting in this section!!! You put this in pop culture.

[·Toot]

this shud be in the pop culture section.

 

well while its here i dont think there is a 5th edition but what do i know?

and i wud help out with ocg but mine isnt all that gud

so

7/10

i liek dbz

[cruelnoob200]

pop culture...

is that Vegeta?

[·Toot]

no its Raditz

[cruelnoob200]

no its Raditz

i knew that

[·Toot]

lol i thought u didnt my bad

[cruelnoob200]

i was being sarcastic hahaha

[GameWorldLeader]

Capitalize!

Instead of absorb say negate.

There are way too many monster effects and traps that do something like that.

 

4/10 for the card

OVER 9000/10 for the theme

[-Resistance-]

OMG its over 9000!

[chedbonlahor]

Standard and average card, yet nice try:

1. Firstly let me correct the OCG. I believe it should look a little something like this:

 

When a monster on your oppenent's side of the field selects a monster on your side of the field as an attack target, you can activate this card to negate the attack.

 

2. There are too many cards like this, i think you should try and make it do something more or give it a silghtly different effect.

 

3. Shouldn't Raditz be a monster, if you a dbz style negate attack you should use the image of instant transmition or a teleportation.

[-Resistance-]

Standard and average card' date=' yet nice try:

1. Firstly let me correct the OCG. I believe it should look a little something like this:

 

When a monster on your oppenent's side of the field selects a monster on your side of the field as an attack target, you can activate this card to negate the attack.

 

2. There are too many cards like this, i think you should try and make it do something more or give it a silghtly different effect.

 

3. Shouldn't Raditz be a monster, if you a dbz style negate attack you should use the image of instant transmition or a teleportation.

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4.It shouldnt be in this section.

[GameWorldLeader]

Standard and average card' date=' yet nice try:

1. Firstly let me correct the OCG. I believe it should look a little something like this:

 

When a monster on your oppenent's side of the field selects a monster on your side of the field as an attack target, you can activate this card to negate the attack.

 

2. There are too many cards like this, i think you should try and make it do something more or give it a silghtly different effect.

 

3. Shouldn't Raditz be a monster, if you a dbz style negate attack you should use the image of instant transmition or a teleportation.

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4.It shouldnt be in this section.

 

I support number 4