justynandtony Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 check them out..... what do you think?1 "Goku- SS 3" + 1 "Vegeta- SS 3"This card is not affected by Effects, Magic, Spell, or Trap cards. Add 1500 ATK for each fusion you and your opponents deck and graveyardOnce per turn, you may select one of your opponents monsters, destroy it and remove it from playgain 500 ATK and DEF for each card in you and your opponents graveyardIf this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle, during your next standby phase he is summoned back to the field in face up position. He gains 1000 ATK each time he is destroyed.when your opponent targets one of your monsters, you can use this card to absorb the attack, this card is then sent to the graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 These are all far too OP'ed and have OCG errors. Seriously. It doesn't take much to make a realistic dbz card... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Most of the OCG is bad. I mean, for most of your cards, your sentences don't begin with capitals. Vegeta never goes SS3, nor does Gogeta... but meh... alright, whatever... They are all extremely overpowered. Gogeta is a Divine attribute? WHY, PLEASE TELL ME WHY Goku SS3 is stronger than Gogeta. AND WHY does he have 6000 ATK? And "what the----"? 9000 DEF? Raditz's Card Lore: "You can use this card to absorb the attack,..." I get what you're trying to say in all of your cards, but it's not properly worded. Post the card lores underneath the cards so people can correct them better, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justynandtony Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 what is ocg? and what about lores Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 OCG is "Official Card Grammer". Maybe I should have said that. I'm sorry. Card lores are the text: the effects. Put them into the thread underneath the cards so we can copy and paste them into responces and correct them, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justynandtony Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 ok thanks ill do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Yes, Here's your Piccolo card that I designed, and how it should look. [spoiler=justynandtony's card]Lore: On the turn after this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Summon this card from the Graveyard in Face-up Defence Position. You see how the effect balances out? You need to do things like this. I'm not saying that you'll become brilliant instantly, just try and tone it down a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justynandtony Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 i like the changes you made ill keep that one thaks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Sure, I'll PM you the link. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 haha why is piccolos attribute yoshi? haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 if your gonna make a card with 9000 defense... please make it 9001 ATK at least so i can say...IT'S OVER NIIIIIINE THOOOOUSAAAAANDDD!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whocaresrmd Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 OCG errors galore i only liked the pics waywaywaywayy too strong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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