dakota Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 here it is im new at this so im not very goodplz post a reply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Really bad grammar. It should say, "They say he came from Hell itself, but one thing's certain; he's no hero."Circulation can just be something like "1st Edition" or "Special Edition."The second part of a set ID is usually EN00X. The X is whatever number, such as the first card you make is EN001, then EN002 and so on. The type is Beast-Warrior, not Beast Warrior. ATK and DEF are actually balanced quite well. Also, capitalize the L in Lycan and the K in Knight so it's not lycan knight. Good picture. I give it a 7/10 because you're new. Cool concept, make more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dakota Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 thx for the info i will make a vampire knight also Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 You don't have to put the description in quotes unless you've taken in from a movie or something. Grammar has improved. You should try making some effect cards. They're difficult at first, but it get easier. And you have yet to fix the problems of Lycan Knight, but they're mostly minor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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