jehlan Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 [align=left]My monster Voltron Name: VoltronATK: 2400DEF: 2150Attribute: WindType: MachineEffect:Increase the ATK & DEF of this monster 500 points by offering one Machine-Type monster from your side of the field.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 [align=left]My monster Voltron Name: VoltronATK: 2400DEF: 2150Attribute: WindType: MachineEffect:Increase the ATK & DEF of this monster 500 points by offering one Machine-Type monster from your side of the field.[/align] That looks like some dodgey transformer / gundam wing creation. A few OCG errors here and there Its attribute is earth not wind. Also it could get overpowered. Even tho its basic good first try ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 overpowered6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 i agree with above ^^^although cus ur new i think ill give u 6.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 1) 2.7/5.1 from me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jehlan Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Well thank you it just a picture i can’t put it it in my Yu-Gi-Oh! Power of Chaos JOEY THE PASSION if i can tell me please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jehlan Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 wait a moment OCG??????????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Official Card Grammar, how the effect is worded and presented. If its not worded as it would be on an official card, then its classed as an OCG error. It should be worded something like.. Tribute 1 Machine-Type monster on your field to increase this cards ATK and DEF by 500 points. or Tribute 1 Machine-Type monster on your field to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Reword it like this. Tribute 1 Machine-Type monster on your side of the field to increase this cards ATK and DEF by 500 until the end of your turn. That should be right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 i have already reworded it for him, the way he wrote it, you reworded it and changed the effect, which is wrong, as he might want it to last forever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 i have already reworded it for him' date=' the way he wrote it, you reworded it and changed the effect, which is wrong, as he might want it to last forever.[/quote'] I didn't even see that lol, did you just edit your post now?I only reworded it like that so it wouldn't be overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Blood got it, overpowered. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Yankee i think we all got it lol and it appears i edited it at the exact same time you posted lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Yankee i think we all got it lol and it appears i edited it at the exact same time you posted lol What are the chances of that. We wrote nearly the exact same thing at the same time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Pretty good attempt for a first go, i sorta like it. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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