jakkk1k93 Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Hello, first of all i got this picture off google. second of all, i got quite stuck on tha ocg of this card so it might be wrong, sorry, but please comment fairly. I also make Dark Synchro's for other people if your interested, all i want is rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duelistxynam Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Picture: 10. Loving the connection between picture and name. ATK/DEF: 4. Sorry, I HATE doing this but it has to have SOME sort of ATK/DEF to start with. Even with its first effect, it needs SOMETHING to work with in the first place (e.g. what if this is the only monster on the field--no sense in Dark Synchro Summoninng it if it has 0 ATK) Effect: 6+ The second effect is a constant free Threatening Roar (OP). The first effect is...not consistent with an Illiusionist. Overal: 5 The picture is great, the effects just need a little more tweaking for less power and more "thematics". Hope to see more soon. You seem to have great potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Thanks alot! all critisism is well taken :D yea i thought the picture was good too ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 A few things to note. 1. Minor OCG and Grammar issues: "Once per turn (during your Draw/Standby/Battle/End Phase?) you can select 1 of the following effects and activate it:1. Select 1 monster that your opponent controls. This card gains the ATK and DEF of the card you selected. The selected card's ATK and DEF then become 0.2. Your opponent cannot attack during their turn. 2. That's OP'ed anyway... You NEED to add some drawbacks if you want this to work. 3: No Circulation ID. A good point: Love the pic and the connection to the name. 6/10 for effort.EDIT: But no +rep yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tricksy Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 hmm i like the card, especially the pic. I think that this card would be just about perfect if the second effect was changed or removed all together, otherwise it's overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Hi everyone, and awesome card dude. ^^ I give it a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Thank everyone alot! :D the critisism is really helpful for the fututre! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Future*, and how do I earn stars under my Avatar? Just a quick question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 You get them by commenting alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 this is gr89.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 haha :Dcheers scope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Okay thanks. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 That's another HP Doom pic i think. Well all in all nice job bud! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 haha, wow, i seem to use alot of his cards, lol, taa ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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