ParaToxic Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 You know the drill, rate/hate/comment [spoiler=[b]LORE[/b]]Activate when your opponent attacks a Warrior-Type monster. Discard any number of cards from your hand. The attacked monster gains 500 ATK for each card discarded until End Phase. Your opponent cannot select any other card as an attack target until End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 pretty good, but id get rid of the last effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 I like it, but the pic and name don't seem to go well with the effect.where you put "any other cards as an attack target until End Phase" you forgot the "the" between "until" and "End Phase" (sure it was just a quick typing error) Also I'm not sure, but does the first effect need to read "....attacks a Warrior-Type monster you control" idk for sure, thats what I would've put. Anyways I like what you have here, 7/10 with a new pic and name that match more, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 i agree fully with manpole Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParaToxic Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 mmmm, kayanyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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