jakkk1k93 Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 I got this picture from google! please rate fairly, and iff you think i done well, give me a rep point! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Belive it or not, this card is underpowered.. Try posting the effect under the card, because some people can't read it. Little OCG problems, great picture, overall I like it. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 If this is the fourth "Sacred Beast" (not counting "Artemiel"), then what is its "Egyptian" and "Wicked God" counterpart? That is the inherent problem with expanding trinities like this; you have to expand all of the related ones. Also, the trio of "Sacred Beast" effects cover the three possible ways of Special Summoning them. As for the card; it looks more like a Machine than a Spellcaster. And the effect is not very useful. Consider that most Lv. -6 and lower Dark Synchro monsters will have very powerful effects and a trio of those will probably provide more strength than this card, since its ATK is only slightly higher and it needs two tributes to activate. My recommendation would be to scrap the whole 'Fourth Sacred Beast' thing and make a card based around that picture, since it is a good one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 thanks everyone, i was going to make a 4th egyptian god and wicked anyways. but heyy, thanks again :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 I believe "normal summoned" and "special summoned" need to be capitalized, also this card seems sort of tough to get out, because synchro monsters already require multipe tributes, maybe make it need only 2 dark synchros? after this cards effect where it's own effect cannot be negated, you need to put a space after that period*(that was just a quick typing error im sure) thats it for me, pretty cool card, like the pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 thanks alot manpole, i want to keep it 3 dark synchro's because all the other Sacred Beasts are 3 cards, so what if i make him stronger? anyone? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Yah, maybe add the effect... "When this monster is removed from the field, Special Summon one of the monsters used to tribute this card." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 yeah, that could be a good idea, cheers. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 You sure that ain't a picture from HP Doom's Gallery? And as for your card... superb. ^^ 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Isn't that image from HP Doom? Ah well google probably has the same images. OCG isn't that good but card is not bad! Nice job buddy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 That's pretty true. Your OCG needs some work, but not that much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Ya all it is are some capitalization errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 cheers digimistress and ace, yea it probably is, i got it from google by cropping another card so heyy, taa anyways :Di have edited the card now, it should be much better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 If you want a fix, this is it: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Dark Synchro monsters you control. This card's effect cannot be negated. This card is unaffected by Trap Cards your opponent controls. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Tribute 2 monsters you control. If you do, during your Battle Phase, this card can attack directly. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard, ignoring the Summoning Conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Oh thanks! :)yet again, it has been edited :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Yup its much better now! Great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Much better. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 haha taa guys and ladies ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 LOLZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 heyy ace, remember my death sorceress deck i was making? well i have nearly finished now, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Kool! My Sealed Incarnates are almost done as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Ah nice 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 This monster is too sacky, especially for a card that you have to wait to draw, or let sit in your hand. The Tributes needed for this card are almost never going to happen, so it's always dead. Now, granted, once you get it out, you can use it's last effect to Summon another one, (assuming you dumped another one), but everything else makes it pretty much unusable. Sorry man, you were off the mark, here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 i realised, although i did make it at 2 o clock in tha mornin, haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MujinTengu Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 difficult, maybe to difficult to get it on field under powered and like said before its looks like a machine more then spellcaster. I think that another eff would sweet this card more...something like "when this card send to your graveyard from the field, you can remove from play 1 *** card in your *** to Special Summoned this card to your side of the field" or I don't knowoverall 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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