Delta Dragon & Delta Dragon XD

[C. Man]

Goro XD + Delta Dragon

When this card is Summoned destroy all monster on the field except this card.When this monster is attacked you can remove one "Delta" card from your Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by 500.

 

1 Tuner + 1 Non-Tuner "Delta" Monster

 

1 GangMember + 1 Gang Tuner + GangMembers

When this card is summoned,destroy all cards on your opponets field.This card can attack directley.This card gains 5000 atk points when you have 5 or more GangMember cards in your graveyard.

[Ｄｈａｒｃ]

You don't use attatchments. Ever. I know you're a n00b, but you should read the rules. If you don't know how to do it w/o attatchments, just save the picture, go to tinypic.com, and the rest is simple.

 

Now, onto the cards: WAY OP'ed. 'Nuff said. You should also use better quality images and change Delta's to something less overused (Not XD, the other one).

XD: Needs work, change effect to one that gives it 700 ATK instead of 1500.

Reg.: Weaken it, add drawback, something to make it less OP'ed.

[C. Man]

Please reply to this i worked hard on these cards

[NeXodus]

Please reply to this i worked hard on these cards

 

Tch yeah, real hard.

 

I'm not trying to be mean, but these cards are HORRIBLE.

From the pic, to the OCG. Though it is normal for a newbie to

create terrible cards. Yep. No attachements.

[C. Man]

there you happy

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ok i fixed it

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ok i fixed it

[NeXodus]

No, the OCG is still pretty bad. And so is the image. It's so blurry and unclear. And who's "Goro XD"? Post him to please.

 

Never fully capitilized your words like your "ALL" in the effect, now allow me to help:

You HAVE to put a "" around the name or archtype when in the effect. (i.e Discard 1 "(Random Card Name)"...

Graveyard must be capitilized.

Summoned does too.

attack should be ATK when meaning the ATK of a monster.

Increase is spelled wrong.

That is not what goes in the Set ID. What should be in there is:

EXAMPLE: AROR-ENXXX or to better explain, the abbreviation of the

pack it's in and the card number.

Nor does whatever is in the circulation should be there.

What it should be is Limited Edition or 1st Edition. 2nd Edition is not really supposed to be there, but 2nd Edition exists.

Even a level 10 should not have 2XXX ATK and 3XXX DEF. That's a bit overpowered.

Same with the effect which is very op.

[C. Man]

k i will fix the cards thx

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Is That better

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repley plz