New card. Need comments.

[Yamato Hattori]

I need comments on this card. Plz help me out!

Im a new user so take it ez!

 

 

Lore:

When summoned sucssessfully, Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each FIRE atrribute monster on the field. Select one face-up spell card on your opponent controls and send it to the graveyard.

[NeXodus]

Ahem...

Blah blah blah OCG ERRORS.

 

When this card is Summoned Successfully, increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each FIRE monster on the field. Select 1 face-up Spell Card your opponent controls and send it to the Graveyard.

 

The picture is good, though I know you got that from a archive! ADMIT IT.

What's a Neko? Never, ever, ever, never ever, heard of it before.

This card is on the bland side? Yes.

But is it bad? No.

6/10

[CMRenji]

Pretty good for a new member. I will fix the OCG.

 

When this card is Summoned, increase this card's ATK by 100 for each FIRE monster on the field. When this card is Summoned, select one face-up Spell Card your opponent controls and destroy it.

 

I think that's right. Pretty good. Also, don't use fake types like "Neko" or "Hero". 7.6/10

[Yamato Hattori]

Pretty good for a new member. I will fix the OCG.

 

When this card is Summoned' date=' increase this card's ATK by 100 for each FIRE monster on the field. When this card is Summoned, select one face-up Spell Card your opponent controls and destroy it.

 

I think that's right. Pretty good. Also, don't use fake types like "Neko" or "Hero". 7.6/10

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Thank you so much! I'll remember the fake types tho. Thnx again for fixing the ocg.

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Ok! I fixed the ocg, now tell me what u think!!