Fiend/Zombie - WRAITH SET - (COMMENT/ADVICE/HATE PLZ)

[Lord_Vampire_101]

Hey guys. I'm new here to YGO Card Maker Forums, even though I've been using the app for a short while. Decided I might try uploading one of my cards. I haven't played Yu-Gi-Oh in about four years, so forgive poor OCG.

 

I'm working on a Wraith-based set made up of Zombie and Fiend types. I would really like some help with these and I'm hoping to eventually make a full 60-Card set.

 

Your opponent's Monsters lose 300 ATK for every face-up Continuous Spell Card.

 

When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 400 Life Points to return this card to your hand. If you do, destroy 1 face-down card on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Activate only when you opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and decrease the ATK of the attacking Monster by 300 for every Zombie-Type in your Graveyard. Then, decrease your Life Points by the amount equal to the Monster's new ATK.

 

When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, switch the ATK and DEF of 1 of the monsters on your opponent's side of the field with the ATK and DEF of this card. This effect lasts until that monster is destroyed.

 

At the beginning of your turn, you can pay 100 Life Points. If you do, all monsters on your side of the field are unaffected by the effects of all Trap Cards activated during the next battle phase. If this card is destroyed by a Spell Card after this effect has been activated remove this card from play.

 

This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card is attacked, you can remove 1 random card in your Graveyard from play to negate the attack. If you do, this card's ATK is reduced by 100. For every card removed from play, this card has its DEF increased by 100.

 

When this card successfully destroys a monster by battle, you can pay 200 Life Points to have that monster removed from play. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any Equip Spell cards equipped to your opponent's monsters have their ATK and DEF boosts decreased by half.

 

If a Fiend or Ghost type monster on your side of the field is sent to the Graveyard, this card's ATK and DEF are increased by 100. If a Fiend or Ghost type monster is removed from play, this card's ATK and DEF are increased by 200.

 

Choose 1 monster from your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card. That monster will lose 200 ATK and DEF points each turn. This card will be unaffected by the effects of Spells, Traps and monster card effects besides this card. If the equipped monster has 0 ATK and DEF points, destroy it.

 

"Jigoku Akuryou, The Whisperer" + "Kizu, The Hunter" This card cannot be removed from play. When this card destroys another monster by battle, remove 1 Trap or Spell card from your opponent's side of the field. If this card destroys a face-up monster in Defense Position, apply damage calculation as if the destroyed monster were in ATK mode. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. In order to Special Summon this card, you must remove 1 Fiend type monster from your Graveyard from play. While this card is in play, any monsters on your opponent's side of the field destroyed by the effects of a Spell or Trap card are sent to your Graveyard instead. When this effect is activated, inflict 100 damage to your opponent.

 

A soldier that has been slain on the battlefield and sent to hell, now re-animated by a Wraith to find and slay polluted souls.

 

Activate only when your opponent summons a monster in DEF position. That monster now counts as Zombie type as well as it's current type and has it's DEF reduced to 0. If this card is destroyed, that card no longer counts as Zombie type and has it's ATK reduced to 0.

 

As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, whenever a Spell card is sent to the Graveyard the owner of that card will be dealt 300 damage.

 

 

This art is not mine. The art found in these cards belongs to various artists all over the internet (Mainly from Deviantart).

 

 

V1.3 Major OCG fixes... once again thanks to Turnerwizard.

V1.4 Overall power increase to fix UP'ness. Added Kizu and Kyoufushou.

V1.5 Added Seishin and Damnation.

V1.6 Added Judgement Wraith, Incarnate Of The Damned, Chaotic Absorption and Zankokusa The Tormentor.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

BUMP MUTHAFUDGAS.

 

^_^

[Lord_Vampire_101]

BUMP MUTHAFUDGAS.

 

^_^

[Lord_Vampire_101]

BUMP MUTHAFUDGAS.

 

^_^

[Tunerwizard]

Well, Ghost is not a real type-use Zombie instead

Ghost/Warrior? Monsters cannot have 2 types

Magic Cards= Spell Cards

immune= unaffected

This effect lasts 1 turn. =until the End Phase of this turn.

[Tunerwizard]

Well, Ghost is not a real type-use Zombie instead

Ghost/Warrior? Monsters cannot have 2 types

Magic Cards= Spell Cards

immune= unaffected

This effect lasts 1 turn. =until the End Phase of this turn.

[Tunerwizard]

Well, Ghost is not a real type-use Zombie instead

Ghost/Warrior? Monsters cannot have 2 types

Magic Cards= Spell Cards

immune= unaffected

This effect lasts 1 turn. =until the End Phase of this turn.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

Thanks Tunerwizard. Much appreciated.

 

Edited.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

Thanks Tunerwizard. Much appreciated.

 

Edited.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

Thanks Tunerwizard. Much appreciated.

 

Edited.

[Tunerwizard]

I fixed the Grammar for you, this was a lot of work XD

Make sure to remove those Ghost-Types for now on or else some people will disregard your posts.

 

 

[1st card]Your opponent's Monsters lose 200 ATK for every face-up Continuous Spell Card.

 

[2nd card]When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to return this card to your hand. If you do, destroy 1 face-down Monster on your opponent's side of the field.

 

[3rd card]Activate only when you opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and decrease the ATK of the attacking Monster by 300 for every Zombie-Type in your Graveyard. Then, decrease your Life Points by the amount equal to the Monster's new ATK.

 

[4th card]When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, switch the ATK and DEF of 1 of the monsters on your opponent's side of the field with the ATK and DEF of this card. This effect lasts until the End Phase of this turn.

 

[5th]At the beginning of your turn, you can pay 200 Life Points. If you do, this card is unaffected by the effects of all Trap Cards activated during the next battle phase. If this card is destroyed by a Spell Card after this effect has been activated remove this card from play.

 

[6th]This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card is attacked, you can remove 1 random card in your Graveyard from play to negate the attack. If you do, this card's ATK is reduced by 100. For every card removed from play, this card has its DEF increased by 100.

[Tunerwizard]

I fixed the Grammar for you, this was a lot of work XD

Make sure to remove those Ghost-Types for now on or else some people will disregard your posts.

 

 

[1st card]Your opponent's Monsters lose 200 ATK for every face-up Continuous Spell Card.

 

[2nd card]When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to return this card to your hand. If you do, destroy 1 face-down Monster on your opponent's side of the field.

 

[3rd card]Activate only when you opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and decrease the ATK of the attacking Monster by 300 for every Zombie-Type in your Graveyard. Then, decrease your Life Points by the amount equal to the Monster's new ATK.

 

[4th card]When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, switch the ATK and DEF of 1 of the monsters on your opponent's side of the field with the ATK and DEF of this card. This effect lasts until the End Phase of this turn.

 

[5th]At the beginning of your turn, you can pay 200 Life Points. If you do, this card is unaffected by the effects of all Trap Cards activated during the next battle phase. If this card is destroyed by a Spell Card after this effect has been activated remove this card from play.

 

[6th]This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card is attacked, you can remove 1 random card in your Graveyard from play to negate the attack. If you do, this card's ATK is reduced by 100. For every card removed from play, this card has its DEF increased by 100.

[Tunerwizard]

I fixed the Grammar for you, this was a lot of work XD

Make sure to remove those Ghost-Types for now on or else some people will disregard your posts.

 

 

[1st card]Your opponent's Monsters lose 200 ATK for every face-up Continuous Spell Card.

 

[2nd card]When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to return this card to your hand. If you do, destroy 1 face-down Monster on your opponent's side of the field.

 

[3rd card]Activate only when you opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and decrease the ATK of the attacking Monster by 300 for every Zombie-Type in your Graveyard. Then, decrease your Life Points by the amount equal to the Monster's new ATK.

 

[4th card]When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, switch the ATK and DEF of 1 of the monsters on your opponent's side of the field with the ATK and DEF of this card. This effect lasts until the End Phase of this turn.

 

[5th]At the beginning of your turn, you can pay 200 Life Points. If you do, this card is unaffected by the effects of all Trap Cards activated during the next battle phase. If this card is destroyed by a Spell Card after this effect has been activated remove this card from play.

 

[6th]This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card is attacked, you can remove 1 random card in your Graveyard from play to negate the attack. If you do, this card's ATK is reduced by 100. For every card removed from play, this card has its DEF increased by 100.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

...Wow.

 

Thankyou. So much. I'll edit all that in shortly.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

...Wow.

 

Thankyou. So much. I'll edit all that in shortly.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

...Wow.

 

Thankyou. So much. I'll edit all that in shortly.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

There we go. Edited.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

There we go. Edited.

[Tricksy]

Jigoku Akuryou, The Whisperer: Underpowered in my opinion, the effect isn't that powerful for it to have such low ATK for a tribute monster. Also, i see the theme that your goin for in this set and it's interesting, im hoping to see how it plays out.

 

Kagekishi, The Slayer: Again, underpowered. I know how hard it is to find the balance between under/overpowered, but it can be done and i think that you just need to tweak it a little lit to find that balance. I think that returning a tribute monster to your hand is just a waste, especially one with a low 2000 ATK. it does have potential though, and it would be good if you changed the end of its effect to any face-down card, including spell/traps.

 

Memories of Despair: I loveeeeee this card. I think it has perfect balance. its a 10/10 and thats hard to come by. Its really creative also, and thats how i judge cards. great job.

 

Modori, The Goremaster: unfortunately, its underpowered. But i like it. A lot. It would be perfect in every way if the ATK/DEF switch stayed the entire duel not just one turn.

 

Shenderiu, the sorrowful: I love the name and picture for this card. its just perfect. But this card is really really underpowered. more than all of the rest. There is a card called "Mirage Dragon" that does the same exact thing and it have 1600 ATK and you dont have to pay Life Points and it protects all of your monsters during the battle phase, so i would change it around a little.

 

Tsuohiu, The shadow: I think that this card has perfect balance. It is a great and creative idea. However it has one drawback, the picture and name remind me more of a fiend-type card then a Zombie-Type.

 

Well anyway, great set and it's got great potential. I repect your perfect OCG which is extreemly uncommon so thank you. I hope you enjoyed my feedback. im gonna end this by rating this set a 9/10 and i can't wait to see more. good job.

[Tricksy]

Jigoku Akuryou, The Whisperer: Underpowered in my opinion, the effect isn't that powerful for it to have such low ATK for a tribute monster. Also, i see the theme that your goin for in this set and it's interesting, im hoping to see how it plays out.

 

Kagekishi, The Slayer: Again, underpowered. I know how hard it is to find the balance between under/overpowered, but it can be done and i think that you just need to tweak it a little lit to find that balance. I think that returning a tribute monster to your hand is just a waste, especially one with a low 2000 ATK. it does have potential though, and it would be good if you changed the end of its effect to any face-down card, including spell/traps.

 

Memories of Despair: I loveeeeee this card. I think it has perfect balance. its a 10/10 and thats hard to come by. Its really creative also, and thats how i judge cards. great job.

 

Modori, The Goremaster: unfortunately, its underpowered. But i like it. A lot. It would be perfect in every way if the ATK/DEF switch stayed the entire duel not just one turn.

 

Shenderiu, the sorrowful: I love the name and picture for this card. its just perfect. But this card is really really underpowered. more than all of the rest. There is a card called "Mirage Dragon" that does the same exact thing and it have 1600 ATK and you dont have to pay Life Points and it protects all of your monsters during the battle phase, so i would change it around a little.

 

Tsuohiu, The shadow: I think that this card has perfect balance. It is a great and creative idea. However it has one drawback, the picture and name remind me more of a fiend-type card then a Zombie-Type.

 

Well anyway, great set and it's got great potential. I repect your perfect OCG which is extreemly uncommon so thank you. I hope you enjoyed my feedback. im gonna end this by rating this set a 9/10 and i can't wait to see more. good job.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

Perfect OCG is thanks to Tunerwizard. I kind of suck at OCG myself. I'll try to apply some of your suggestions - thanks for your input.

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Updated: Changed some of the cards to suit your wishes, TCC. Also added Kizu The Hunter and Kyoufushou The Death Scribe. Turns out this will be a Zombie/Fiend deck after all.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

Perfect OCG is thanks to Tunerwizard. I kind of suck at OCG myself. I'll try to apply some of your suggestions - thanks for your input.

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Updated: Changed some of the cards to suit your wishes, TCC. Also added Kizu The Hunter and Kyoufushou The Death Scribe. Turns out this will be a Zombie/Fiend deck after all.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

B-B-B-BUMP!!!!!

 

Added A fusion monster and a spell. ^_^

[kemren_18]

Yea...Tunerwizard is right about what he just commented in you..like me, i have so many cards to be corrected in my current OCG knowledge..but since you're new here ill give you 4/10...for efforts..hehehe..

 

note:read the OCG guide..

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yea Tunerwizard is right about what he just said...like me im still studying on how to make my OCG better..but now i Have more knowledge in making OCGs and creating graphics..

 

but because you're new here, ill give you 6/10 for your efforts and attending this site..

 

 

 

 

note: read the OCG guide.

[Lord_Vampire_101]

Double post?

 

But thanks for your comment(s) - I read the OCG guide, but found of the situations I invented weren't answered by it. But I'll check it again anyhoo. Thanks again.