new and updated cards from my first pack

[Kyled30]

[Kyled30]

Im open to be told wts wrong

[legofreak098]

Over Powerd ATK + Effects, and overused pictures, but overall its ok seing as your new

 

6/10

[cRAGLE 62]

your OCG is off btw

Water Dragon should read:

You can send this card you control to the Graveyard to negate a Monster Effect, Spell or Trap. If you use this effect, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your End Phase.

 

Ice Dragon:

Same as above

 

Turret Dragon:

Once per turn you may destroy 1 card on the field.

 

Robot Dragon:

If this card would be destroyed, you may pay 300 Life Points. If you do, this card is not destroyed.

 

Overused pics. Slightly overpowered effects on the Synchros considering their defence. Overall, for a newbie = 6.5/10

If you can maybe lower the stats slightly, and fix the OCG, i'll give you 8/10

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Dragon Water Dragon already exists.

 

Names are bland, spice them up some. Give them something cool to be called. Also it should be Dragon/Tuner and Dragon/Union, the Synchros are right though. Except for Ice Dragon all those pics are overused a lot. They are also extremely OP'd, effects are way too powerful and ATK/DEF are way too high for the levels. I won't go through fixing everything, but you are welcome to ask me questions. Look at the cards other members have done, especially 5 or 6 star members. That will show you what you need to fix. Needs work but not the worst I've ever seen.

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Ok what I'm going to do is give you three things to work on each card.

 

Water Dragon

-Dull name.

-6 star monster with 4000 DEF. Really?

-Effect is overpowered as there is huge power at little cost.

 

Ice Dragon

-It's identical to the card above. Same critisisms then.

 

Turrent Dragon

-Don't understand the name.

-It's labeled as a union. Why, it has no union effect?

-Effect is bland. And needs a cost.

 

Robot Dragon

-It's not a robot. It just isn't

-1700 ATK for a 2 star? Really?

-Generally bland.

 

I won't lie or sugar coat it, these are poor at best.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Turrent Dragon

-Don't understand the name.

-It's labeled as a union. Why, it has no union effect?

-Effect is bland. And needs a cost.

 

Turret Dragon because it is acting like a turret I guess, a better name would be "_____ the Spire Dragon"

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

My bad for mis-reading the name.

 

My other two points stand though.

[Inferno I20]

for the synchro's specify where they return to and the Union dragon is not a union monster because it doesn't equip to anyone