OMG! A vanilla card!

[GageQ1]

 

 

RATE!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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[Smesh]

guess its ok. i really dnt know how to rate vanillas but i guess everything here is in order so 9.9/10

[senatheEND]

TERRIBLE!

6/10 xD

[GageQ1]

All you rate vanilla cards by is, Name/Story/Picture. Thnz for the rating

 

 

Also, I meant for it to get terrible ratings LOL. That's why I lost in a contest with this piece of sh** just wanted to share it with all of YCM.

[dharoko]

I like it :D

[Eternal Duelist]

You Broke the Vanilla rule of Vanillaness! No Vanilla will be as strong or stronger than Blue-Eyes!

1/10 for breaking the rule

(everything else is in order however)

[Manpole]

Why put "These two twins" if they are twins.. then we know there are 2 of them. Also how can they be twins if they are from different tribes, and because they are from different tribes and there are only 2 of them, you don't need the "two" in front of "different tribes".

 

Pic is okay, name is okay, ATK/DEF are good for level... but there is no ID or Serial.

 

I don't like Vanilla cards unless they have support of some kind, so unless you add support or give it an effect 5.9/10

[Cowboy Dan]

Pic: 9/10

Name: 9/10

Story: 0/10 xD JK 9/10

Total: 1/10 xD JK aGaIn 9/10

[~Duo~]

If you give it an effect, then it's not a Vanilla anymore, ruining the purpose, Manpole.

 

 

Pic: 9/10

Name: 9/10

Story: 0/10 xD JK 9/10

Total: 1/10 xD JK aGaIn 9/10

 

And it's not exactly stronger than Blue-Eyes. This has a bit more DEF but has no support so I guess it kinda evens out.

[Manpole]

If you give it an effect' date=' then it's not a Vanilla anymore, ruining the purpose, Manpole.

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I know... and as I said, I don't like Vanilla cards, so give it support, or an effect. (thus changing it)

[GageQ1]

I never put the Serial Number or ID Number on it unless I want to print it so, there is no reason to write that in your posts, and THNX for the ratings... Also, I don't thin kit matters if it is stronger than BEWD, they call it YCMaker for a reason.

[Manpole]

I know serial and Id are not important, I just noticed that it seemed incomplete so if you wanted to add those.

[Zeaux]

And it's not exactly stronger than Blue-Eyes. This has a bit more DEF but has no support so I guess it kinda evens out.

 

No, it still more stronger than BWD. Even if its only the DEF. So no, this card is not good.

[Eternal Duelist]

Well It is the realistic section of the site and there aren't any Vanillas stronger than blue-eyes ._.

thats why i think its not "realistic" (but if they do make any vanillas that break that rule, then that will be a very sad day D:

 

 

 

Yay Zeaux agrees with me :3 ~ <3

[jakkk1k93]

yea, it shouldn't be as high as blue eyes (i have 9 and i love 'em)

[chedbonlahor]

I consider myself a somewhat vanilla expert and you shall be judged on your word play, card believablilty and stroyline.

 

Your way with words needs work however it is not bad

The believability is there I can see it working

The storyline is imaginite but I would leave more to the readers imagination. This is what I would write as the Lore

 

"From distant lands, two equal and opposite forces bound by a fated counterpoint shall merge to defend the world from destruction."

 

You may use that if you want its just a suggestion!!!

 

overall 7.25/10

[GageQ1]

Thanks, chedbonlahor for the tip i'll change it to your Lore it's great!

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FIXED

[Eternal Duelist]

Now thats one sexy looking card ;) 10/10

[jakkk1k93]

It is very sexy ;)

[chedbonlahor]

Im Glad you liked my Lore, I will be glad to do more if you need :)

[·Toot]

eh.. this is kewl

8.5/10

[Zextra]

I like it. Try adding a more creative story/lore, but still, really nice! 9.5/10