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Can you rate this card? It's not a very good nor balance card (in my opinion) with lots of OCG errors but I'll post it anyways. (It's funny how a person with four stars barely created her first card).

 

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[spoiler=Lore] Once per turn, activate one of the following effects depending on the number of Plant-Type monsters in your Graveyard:

2+: You can double the Battle Damage dealt by a Plant-Type monster with 1200 ATK or less.

4+: During your Main Phase, you can draw 1 card. If the card is a Level 5 or lower monster Card, you can Special Summon it. If the card is a Spell Card, Trap Card, or a Level 6 or higher monster Card, remove it from play.

6+:During your Main Phase, you can send 2 Plant-Type monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon a monster from your opponent’s Graveyard onto your side of the field in face-up Defense Position.

 

 

 

P.S- All comment appreciated, and tell me how to improve.

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Can you rate this card? It's not a very good nor balance card (in my opinion) with lots of OCG errors but I'll post it anyways. (It's funny how a person with four stars barely created her first card).

 

358886.jpg

 

[spoiler=Lore] Once per turn, activate one of the following effects depending on the number of Plant-Type monsters in your Graveyard:

2+: You can double the Battle Damage dealt by a Plant-Type monster with 1200 ATK or less.

4+: During your Main Phase, you can draw 1 card. If the card is a Level 5 or lower monster Card, you can Special Summon it. If the card is a Spell Card, Trap Card, or a Level 6 or higher monster Card, remove it from play.

6+:During your Main Phase, you can send 2 Plant-Type monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon a monster from your opponent’s Graveyard onto your side of the field in face-up Defense Position.

 

 

 

P.S- All comment appreciated, and tell me how to improve.

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Can you rate this card? It's not a very good nor balance card (in my opinion) with lots of OCG errors but I'll post it anyways. (It's funny how a person with four stars barely created her first card).

 

358886.jpg

 

[spoiler=Lore] Once per turn, activate one of the following effects depending on the number of Plant-Type monsters in your Graveyard:

2+: You can double the Battle Damage dealt by a Plant-Type monster with 1200 ATK or less.

4+: During your Main Phase, you can draw 1 card. If the card is a Level 5 or lower monster Card, you can Special Summon it. If the card is a Spell Card, Trap Card, or a Level 6 or higher monster Card, remove it from play.

6+:During your Main Phase, you can send 2 Plant-Type monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon a monster from your opponent’s Graveyard onto your side of the field in face-up Defense Position.

 

 

 

P.S- All comment appreciated, and tell me how to improve.

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Holy crap, I just had the SH Theme playing in the background and just looked at the pic of this card and it gave me the eerie, subdued, atmospheric feeling of the SH Games but enough of that, on with the card!

 

Decently, solid OCG with a great image.

The effect seems a tad OP but overall, not bad.

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Holy crap, I just had the SH Theme playing in the background and just looked at the pic of this card and it gave me the eerie, subdued, atmospheric feeling of the SH Games but enough of that, on with the card!

 

Decently, solid OCG with a great image.

The effect seems a tad OP but overall, not bad.

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Holy crap, I just had the SH Theme playing in the background and just looked at the pic of this card and it gave me the eerie, subdued, atmospheric feeling of the SH Games but enough of that, on with the card!

 

Decently, solid OCG with a great image.

The effect seems a tad OP but overall, not bad.

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OPed' date=' so basically if you have 6 Plants in your Graveyard you get all those effects?!??! It needs a Drawback...

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Thanks for rating honestly. I will make a note to myself to fix that.

 

Holy crap' date=' I just had the SH Theme playing in the background and just looked at the pic of this card and it gave me the eerie, subdued, atmospheric feeling of the SH Games but enough of that, on with the card!

 

Decently, solid OCG with a great image.

The effect seems a tad OP but overall, not bad.

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Lol. Thanks for rating.

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OPed' date=' so basically if you have 6 Plants in your Graveyard you get all those effects?!??! It needs a Drawback...

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Thanks for rating honestly. I will make a note to myself to fix that.

 

Holy crap' date=' I just had the SH Theme playing in the background and just looked at the pic of this card and it gave me the eerie, subdued, atmospheric feeling of the SH Games but enough of that, on with the card!

 

Decently, solid OCG with a great image.

The effect seems a tad OP but overall, not bad.

[/quote']

 

Lol. Thanks for rating.

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OPed' date=' so basically if you have 6 Plants in your Graveyard you get all those effects?!??! It needs a Drawback...

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Thanks for rating honestly. I will make a note to myself to fix that.

 

Holy crap' date=' I just had the SH Theme playing in the background and just looked at the pic of this card and it gave me the eerie, subdued, atmospheric feeling of the SH Games but enough of that, on with the card!

 

Decently, solid OCG with a great image.

The effect seems a tad OP but overall, not bad.

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Lol. Thanks for rating.

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Well' date=' I'm not gonna say the obvious already-been-said criticism,

so I'll skip ahead to what I like about it. Cool card image, good OCG,

and great concept. Just adjust the numbers, or add a drawback and it'll have 10/10 so for now,

9/10.

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Well' date=' I'm not gonna say the obvious already-been-said criticism,

so I'll skip ahead to what I like about it. Cool card image, good OCG,

and great concept. Just adjust the numbers, or add a drawback and it'll have 10/10 so for now,

9/10.

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Well' date=' I'm not gonna say the obvious already-been-said criticism,

so I'll skip ahead to what I like about it. Cool card image, good OCG,

and great concept. Just adjust the numbers, or add a drawback and it'll have 10/10 so for now,

9/10.

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Here are the OCG fixes (Sorry I'm not good at it; there are probably still plenty in there, but I tried)

 

Once per turn, activate one of the following effects depending on the number of Plant-Type monsters in your Graveyard:

2+: You can double the Battle Damage dealt by a Plant-Type monster with 1200 ATK or less.

3+: During your Main Phase, you can draw 1 card. If the card is a Level 5 or lower Monster Card, you can Special Summon it. If the card is a Spell Card, Trap Card, or a Level 6 or higher Monster Card, remove it from play.

5+: During your Main Phase, you can send 2 Plant-Type monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon a monster from your opponent’s Graveyard onto your side of the field in face-up Defense Position.

 

I like the idea a lot. It's been a while since Plants had their own Field Spell (The last on was Forest or something, released in the very first set ever). Anyways, I really like the card. After the OCG fixes, 9-9.5/10

VERY nice for a 1st card! Keep up the good work and good luck! :D

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