Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 well, these are my first cards. i hope they are well balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 its overpowered. good for your first try tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Well, good cards, but the gramma ris off, all summoning conditions must be capitalized, like Ritural Summon. Ok, well, the effect on the monster is kind of cool. Pretty cool. Nce first cards ^_^9/10 for new.7/10 for normal ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 its overpowered. good for your first try tho. sorry for questioning this' date=' but do you really think it's overpowered? i mean, i made this card based on two cards: "Shinato, King of a Higher Plane" and "Guardian Angel Joan" and they are more powerfull, have less level and their effects are pretty similar. so i thought it was ok. Well, good cards, but the gramma ris off, all summoning conditions must be capitalized, like Ritural Summon. Ok, well, the effect on the monster is kind of cool. Pretty cool. Nce first cards ^_^9/10 for new.7/10 for normal ^_^ and sorry for this too, but my english is not perfect and i want to do my best and fix these cards, so what do you mean with "gramma" and "all summoning conditions must be capitalized"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Yes its overpowered, 12 stars firstly is majorly overpowered. You hardly ever see 12 star monsters, thats a clear sign str8 away that somethings not right. Also its effect is surprising powerful, and to say its just 1 more 4 star then a masked beast truely makes this overpowered in my eyes. And theres also a spelling error, and your OCG may possibly be error'd and theres Grammar errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 ok, i trust you, now i hope that this will make it better. sorry for being so annoying, but i really want to make a good job. and thanks for showing my mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 now its sort of underpowered. Levels is good, perhaps using half of the original effect. How about inflicting damage equal to the full attack of the monster it destroys. Sort of like a flame wingman, i think it would work good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 seems pretty good i guess i like the pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 maybe, but i want to make effects that are barely seen or at least not popular. like you say that effect of full attack of the destroyed monster, also Shinato, King of a Higher Plane has that effect. and you say it´s sort of underpowered and perhaps using half of the effect... won´t make it even more underpowered? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Welll its just increasing your life points by 1000 is a common effect, hmm, for now stick with what you have and ill try and think or a random odd effect for ya ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 well, i´m a little inspired, so i´ll make more cards now. for know, a simple one (does anybody know how to change the name of this topic?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Yes go onto your first post and full edit it, and change the title. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Yes go onto your first post and full edit it' date=' and change the title.[/quote'] thanks, now i want to make an effect monster which effects allows me to pay life points to make that monster attack again that turn, how should i write it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 well i would say, off the top of my head, summet like this... During your Battle Phase, by paying 500 Life Points you may attack twice with this monster. or erm If this card successfully destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, you may pay 500 Life Points to attack once more with this card. something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 I like the 2nd alot more ^_^Any othercar coming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 well, another "powerfull card" to add, and this one with my name. i hope it's balanced enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Overpowered i think, and grammar is off. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speed Dragon90 Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Actually I think it's pretty good mostly balanced, grammar is slightly off 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 at least can someone tell me where's the grammar error? my first languaje is spanish so i don´t know where it is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 another card to show. i think it´s pretty good xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Its very very nice ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Basic effect, but I like the pic, and I don't THINK there is a gramamr error.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Good try good for your FIRST card 3.2/5.0:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 to many stars >_>7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buronkai Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 in that's what i need help most... grammar... it´s not easy when your first languaje is not english... anyway, another card to show: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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