-Athena- Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Okay, so this is my second card. Can you guys fix my OCG errors? But if you don't want to then don't. But please do rate the card for me and I'll I rate yours when possible. All comments appeared (even hate comments). [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 Dragon-Type monsters from your hand. Once every two turns, you can remove a Dragon-Type monster from your hand from play. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 points for each Dragon-Type monster removed from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KishinAkira Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 I like it! That image finally found it's place in a card that fits!I like the effect, it can get pretty big pretty fast, and... yeah.Not sure what it has to do with an aegis, but whatever.8/10 simply because I don't get the aegis part. If you can explain it,definitely a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Thnx for the rating :).Hopefully that picture hasn't been used too much. About the name. When I say aegis, I was thinking of Athena's aegis, which is a shield. A shield protects something. Aruak is the name of a city that I made up. One definition of Obscurus is dark. So in total, the name means The Dark Shield of Aruak. I hope that makes sense to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Your OCG is PERFECT!!! This is like the first time ive seen a card with perfect OCG on the first try. The effect is REALLY AWESOME and REALLY UNIQUE!!!! 11/10 Good frikkin job man. That deserves a rep. Edit: i reviewed your profile and i dont think this is your second card. Your OCG is waaay too good anyway. Cant believe that i believed for a sec that you were new. That does not deserve a rep. But still. Good job 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Once every two = Once per 2 turnsA bit too easy to summon for a 2500 monster.Cool effect.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Your OCG is PERFECT!!! This is like the first time ive seen a card with perfect OCG on the first try. The effect is REALLY AWESOME and REALLY UNIQUE!!!! 11/10 Good frikkin job man. That deserves a rep. Edit: i reviewed your profile and i dont think this is your second card. Your OCG is waaay too good anyway. Cant believe that i believed for a sec that you were new. That does not deserve a rep. But still. Good job 10/10 Lawl and thanks for rating :). Rep or not' date=' it doesn't matter, just as long as you liked it. It is my second card. I'm not lying. I've been rating and judging cards since the day I joined. I was learning from other good card makers. I didn't want to make a card yet cause I didn't feel like I was experience enough. So now that I feel ready I'm making more cards. P.S- If you don't believe me, look at how many cards I've made on the right. It says two._________________________________________________________________________________Once every two = Once per 2 turnsA bit too easy to summon for a 2500 monster.Cool effect.8/10 Thanks for fixing it. I knew there was something wrong with that :). And yeah, I guess that it's abit easy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 I know THETHETHE, but you could easily delete your cards. Im sorry but i cant believe this is your second card :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Lol. Well believe it or not it's true. And I think that's a nice way to put a compliment. One rep for you :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whocaresrmd Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 i thought it was great espicially for a second card uve rated me a lot thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 i thought it was great espicially for a second card uve rated me a lot thx Thank you! And I don't mind rating. It helps me and you :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Wow! Very creative name and the effect goes well with it. I've seen this picture seen many, many, many, many times, but this is the first card I've seen that actually fits with it. This is awesome, and it's only your 2nd card! Wow, you're on your way to success! :D I would rep you, but I'm out of reps for today. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Wow! Very creative name and the effect goes well with it. I've seen this picture seen many' date=' many, many, many times, but this is the first card I've seen that actually fits with it. This is awesome, and it's only your 2nd card! Wow, you're on your way to success! :D I would rep you, but I'm out of reps for today. 10/10[/quote'] Thank you :)! Wow, my first 10/10. I feel god now. Lol. Yeah, I love the name too. It just took me awhile to find the right words. P.S- Aww man. The picture has been used many times. Oh well, at least it's cool picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kemren_18 Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 good...pics...but the OCG has some kind of normal..effect..i mean there's something special about the effect...hope you understand...well, the truth is..i dont like monsters with the effect of removing from play..hehehe...Coz im not master of sacrificing...heheheh...but your image is great...and reinforced with the unique name "ARuak" hehehe..very great... 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 cool card and asweome picture ;)7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 good...pics...but the OCG has some kind of normal..effect..i mean there's something special about the effect...hope you understand...well' date=' the truth is..i dont like monsters with the effect of removing from play..hehehe...Coz im not master of sacrificing...heheheh...but your image is great...and reinforced with the unique name "ARuak" hehehe..very great... 10/10.[/quote'] Thanks for rating. Yeah, I love making unique names :). But I'm still learning how to make a more unique effect (not exactly good at it). cool card and asweome picture ;)7/10 Thanks for rating. I hope you liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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