zenausian Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 hello everyone. i've been playing yugioh for some time, but i've stopped totally. Eventhough, i always wished i could design some cards. well, i found this site. these are the first cards i made: please comment! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapahael Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 These are your firsts? Wow, I can see that maybe you'll have a future here. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zenausian Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 yes, they are. I'm trying to find more good pictures to keep making them. :). Thanks for the compliments, anyhow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeRaver Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Wow nice effects and the "alive Fortress" is a crazy cool pic :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zenausian Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Thanks! I believe they are from MagicTheGathering. But they're s cool that I needed to use 'em :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Pics are ok. "Alive Fortress" just sounds wrong, try changing th name to "Living Fortress" or something like that.OCG is slightly of."Alive Fortress" is seriously OP(OverPowered), a monster with that much DEF ussually has a drawback, but this actually has a handy effect. A 7/10 Good pic sites.Deviantart.comArt Catacombs (google this 1)Pixiv (only when good with translators or if you can speak Japanese) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zenausian Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Sorry, english isn't my first language. I'm still learning ^^. Anyway, thanks for the feedback. If you can correct my OCG, I'd be glad. Thanks for the sites. As for the Alive Fortress, I thought that the first effect would balance it. There aren't Spell or Traps that can change a monster's position? I'll change the name, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 OCG fix: Dust Army: If this card is Summoned while you control no other monsters, increase it's DEF by 2000. This card cannot declare an attack during the turn it was Summoned.I'll fix the Fortress when it's ballanced. I would ballance Fortress by making it an Level 5-6. That would be enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zenausian Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 I'm correcting, but your fix has a minor error: "it's DEF" should be its DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Lol, yeah I do that sometimes, but the rest is ok. Trust me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zenausian Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Ok, I corrected :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 The funny part is that compared to the M:TG card that its picture came from, Living Fortress is actually very underpowered. Google "Emrakul, the Aeons Torn" just for kicks. But I like 'em anyhow. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zenausian Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 yeah, I know :D. But i wasn't really basing the cards on MtG. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Living Fortress is a bit OP as it's a plaguespreading Marshmallon. OCG fix: Dust Army: If this card is Summoned while you control no other monsters' date=' increase it's DEF by 2000. This card cannot declare an attack during the turn it was Summoned.[/i']I'll fix the Fortress when it's ballanced. I would ballance Fortress by making it an Level 5-6. That would be enough. ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 the first one is very weak it only gains defence if SUMMONED which can only be in attack, the second on the other hand is too powerfull 2500 defence for a 4 star is very high. not bad firsts keep up the "good" work :P 5.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 2500 ATK was also considered high but we get those ATK to DEF after attacking monsters. Look at Defender (I think) from D-HEROES. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zenausian Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 the first one is very weak it only gains defence if SUMMONED which can only be in attack' date=' the second on the other hand is too powerfull 2500 defence for a 4 star is very high. not bad firsts keep up the "good" work :P 5.3/10[/quote'] ??... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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