Badhaas Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Here's the first card I made here. The card is part of a serie, but the others have yet to be made. I'm rather satisfied with this one, though I still have doubts about the name and the OCG (if you see mistakes please tell me so I can correct them). EDIT: OCG of the card updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrWorstNightmare009 Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Change the Lore to this: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if there is a "Void" card, "Sky Void" card, and/or a "Space Void" on the field. During your Main Phase, pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 card. If the drawn card has "Void" in it's name, increase your Life Points by 250." Other than that, nice card for your first! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Very nice, but some OCG errors that I can ignore. If this card was real it would be a great addition to a "Void" deck. You should make some more Void monsters, and keep up the good work. RATE: 8.9/10 This is very nice for your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 nice picnice effect all u need to do is use the above OCG fix8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Badhaas Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Thanx for your comments :) @ UrWorstNightmare009The effect of the card is that it can anly be summoned (in any way) if there is one of those 3 cards on the field, those 3 cards are magic cards. So is summoning this card then still considered a special summon? @GrifithI currently got 29 cards finished for a "Void" series, but I made them all in 1 photoshop file. I'll have to remake them here (I think) so there are more to come. OCG will be updated in a few minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Cool, can't wait to seem them. I hope they're good as this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Badhaas Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 In this threat I posted 3 more of my cards:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-216086.htmlI hope you like them to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormmonarch Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 You can improve the OCG:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if there is a face-up "Void" card on the field. During your Main Phase, pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 card. If the card drawn is a "Void" card, increase your Life Points by 250." You don't need to include "Sky Void" or "Space Void", because they are already included when you say "Void" cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Badhaas Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Though if you change it to that it sounds like you can also have any "Void" monster on the field and be able to summon this card, but this card requires the magic card "Void", the magic card "Space Void" or the field card "Sky Void" to be on the field. But what I have now is apparently isn't good, as it gave you the wrong idea of the effect. I made a small change in the OCG, I hope it's more clear now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormmonarch Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 How about this?This card can only be Special Summoned if you control at least one of the following Spell cards, "Void", "Sky Void" and "Space Void". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Badhaas Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 That's it :DThough shouldn't it be just Summoned in stead of Special Summoned because you can still also normal summon the card? If you special summon a monster on the field you can still normal summon another monster on the field in the same turn, but that's not the case here. If you summon this monster (without the effect of another card) you shouldn't be able to summon another monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormmonarch Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 It's up to you intention. As I am not so sure what it is, so I just put Special Summon.I guess you mean one of the following:This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned if you control at least one of the following Spell cards, "Void", "Sky Void" and "Space Void". This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned if you control at least one of the following Spell cards, "Void", "Sky Void" and "Space Void". This card can only be Summoned if you control at least one of the following Spell cards, "Void", "Sky Void" and "Space Void". --> if this is the correct one, the monster can be Normal/Special Summoned when the condition is met. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Badhaas Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 I meant the last one. Thanx for your help :)OCG corrected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormmonarch Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 I am glad that I could help you. Would you mind feedback on my cards?http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-215546.html Thank you so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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