400th Post! Im 4Stars now :D --- To celebrate the occasion: This card!

[Spikeball]

[align=center]Yes, here is my 400-post-card^^ I'm thaat HAAPPY!!!!

 

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[spoiler=Lore]

Once per turn, if this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon it. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard, return it to either the top or the bottom of your Deck and increase your Life Points by 800 Points.

 

 

 

(Kyoi is "Wonder" in japanese, I think^^)

 

See ya all^^

 

PS: Image credit goes to ....--> Myself xD[/align]

[Smesh]

congrats on 4 star

 

now onto the card, the first effect is already pushing it, so id get rid of the increase your life points part. but its pretty good 9/10

[Spikeball]

Thank you^^

I think I'm too excited to make a not OPed card xD I will think about it^^

[Spikeball]

BUMP'os! I got them from Syrtristan 5 and I'm gonna use one now^^

[Grifith]

The effect is quite balanced, the fact how it odes support my LP's a bit, also congrats on the 4stars, the picture is great quality.

 

Not much to say about this one.

 

My rating, a solid 9/10

[~Duo~]

It's a bit OP, because Nephytys (or something like that) requires it to be destroyed by a card effect. Maybe make a bigger cost to re-summon? 8.5/10

[Spikeball]

Thanks for the ratings everyone^^

Looks like the card really is a bit OPed but I think I won't change it since it's a very special card for me now (4-Star-Post-Card^^). I've to keep originality for it :3

Anyway don't stop rating, I LOVE feedback^^

[Spikeball]

BUMP - PMUB - BPUM - MUPB - ....

[Lord_of_Cards_55]

I love it!!!! 9/10 cuz its slightly OP'd

[Where are my COOKIES]

The LP gain should be taken away, but that's already been said.

 

O.O Epic pic

 

9-10

[Spikeball]

Thank you two^^ I eliminated the LP-gain-part now since it really was OPed --> enthusiasm makes OPed cards^^

 

@Where are my COOKIES:

This alone would be considered as spam but anyway: you know Kingdom Hearts (2)? then you will like

^^

[Spikeball]

bumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpumpu-----hehe^^

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

nice card and congrats

[Spikeball]

Thank you^^

[~Shin~]

Congratulations.

[spoiler=FIX]"Once per turn, if this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon it. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard, return it to either the top or the bottom of your Deck and increase your Life Points by 800 Points."

 

I saw only 1 drawback but then after that I saw 2 effects !!

This card can return even during the next turn since you said "Once per turn, if this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard" yes it is during the last turn and that is ok since you did not define a time so you should say "Once pre turn, when" but that will not balance it it still need more then losing 1 card.

"to Special Summon this card." even if it is no longer in your graveyard ?

where did the LP increasing come from ?! it do not fit the effect this card revive it self so how come you gine LP ou should lose some instead this effect must be removed.

6.5/10.

[Spikeball]

Congratulations.

Thank you^^

 

 

[spoiler=FIX]"Once per turn' date=' if this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon it. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard, return it to either the top or the bottom of your Deck and increase your Life Points by 800 Points."

 

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Oh thank you, I think that's the first OCG-fix I got for ages^^ (I have some problems with commas...)

 

 

I saw only 1 drawback but then after that I saw 2 effects !!

This card can return even during the next turn since you said "Once per turn' date=' if this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard" yes it is during the last turn and that is ok since you did not define a time so you should say "Once pre turn, when" but that will not balance it it still need more then losing 1 card.

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I'm kinda confused right now - what's exactly the difference between "once per turn, if" and "once per turn, when"? What I meant was that the effect can only be used once per turn and is useable in the next turn again.

 

 

"to Special Summon this card." even if it is no longer in your graveyard ?

I said "if the card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard"- when the effect activates it has to be in the Graveyard! - so if the card is removed from play by (for example) Macro Cosmos' date=' the situation doesn't match the conditions --> card won't be Special Summoned

 

 

where did the LP increasing come from ?! it do not fit the effect this card revive it self so how come you gine LP ou should lose some instead this effect must be removed.

er-sry - forgot to delete this in the written card lore, I only changed the card itself >.<'

 

 

6.5/10.

That's a solid rating^^

[~Shin~]

Due to my bad english this conversation can not continue.

[crazyeye777]

congrats yahooooo

And I like the card 10/10

[Spikeball]

Due to my bad english this conversation can not continue.

 

oh - come on! Your english is fine. At least explain the difference between "once per turn' date=' if" and "once per turn, when", plz

 

 

congrats yahooooo

And I like the card 10/10

 

:3 Thank you very much^^