Grahoben Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 This is my first Realistic Card. Please tell me any tips, or if it is really horribile (Which some of you may think.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 well...u spelled guardian wrong. Warrior/Beast = Beast-Warrior or Warrior or Beast-TypeMonster = monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 bad pic and OCG probsi cant help with OCG sry 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 It's not a bad first card. OCG has been corrected.Overall, kind of bland, but that's ok. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grahoben Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 I just didn't want to make it too complex, since it was my first And wow... I did spell guardian wrong! Fail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 It's good, Gaurdian is spelled Guardian. It is OP because, it would practically destroy every monster your opponent summons. Most of the cards in people decks are Level 9 or lower, maybe change the effect to where it only destroys Level 3 or lower monsters you opponent summons, it would seem more fair, but now that I look at it the card is a FLIP effect so you can only use it once unless it said, you can flip it face down again if it isn't destroyed, that would be major OP-ing the card's effect... ...It's nice, I'll give it a 9.7/10 @Scope: The picture isn't bad and the OCG is OK not bad. Wow... My posts are long and a lot of other people post before I do because, I take like 2 minutes writing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grahoben Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Yes, but you didn't need to change it. It's your card not mine, I'm just giving some constructive criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grahoben Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 I konw, but I do agree with what you said. I think its better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grahoben Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 New card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grahoben Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 New Robot Warrior card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Your newest cards are great a few OCG errors, but I have a headache so I can't really think right now. Not much to say except that there great and I give them a 8.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grahoben Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Thank you! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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