First card

[YugiNoobie]

This is my first realistic card, I tried my best on it.

I wasn't quite sure if i should put it as level three or four, originally it was four, but I changed it to three.

 

EDIT: I changed the level to four.

EDIT:I changed the card type to Aqua.

 

Please Rate and C&C.

 

Thanks!

[Grifith]

It's good, but this card would be a level 4 or it would be OP, the Water should be WATER in all capitals and also for WATER remove the - between water and type and make Type, type no capitals. The OCG is solid for your first Realistic Card, the effect is nice, but I've never heard of a WATER machine-type monster.

 

Overall, I give it a 8.9/10

[·Toot]

this is gr8 all u need is a better pic

then i'll rate it higher

7.99/10

[-Athena-]

I like the fact that it's a Machine-Type monster but it has a water attribute. It's like how can a machine be underwater without malfunctioning but yeah. Picture is nice.

 

There's some OCG errors and a bit overpowered. So if there's no water type monster on the field the card has 2400 ATK points and 2300 DEF points? Wow, that's a lot but 8.5/10 for you! Good first card :).

 

Keep making more and you'll be a pro.

[Grifith]

I like the fact that it's a Machine-Type monster but it has a water attribute. It's like how can a machine be underwater without malfunctioning

 

 

 

 

@THETHETHE think about a submarine, it's a machine vehicle, so the Mecha Mermaid probably has special plating to keep it water-proof. Just throwing that out to you.

[YugiNoobie]

Thanks for the feedback and ratings everyone!

 

It's good' date=' but this card would be a level 4 or it would be OP, the Water should be WATER in all capitals and also for WATER remove the - between water and type and make Type, type no capitals.[/quote']

 

I changed the level to four. I`m going to edit the card and re-post it in here, but I think your wrong about the second part, excuse me if I`m wrong.

 

The cards Vile Germs, Throwstone Unit and Arsenal Bug all use (insert monster type here)-Type,

I`ll show you.

 

[spoiler=Vile Germs] "Plant-Type"

 

 

[spoiler=Throwstone Unit] "Warrior-Type"

 

 

[spoiler=Arsenal Bug]"Insect type" Just an FYI, I got the idea of the effect for Mecha Mermaid from this card. XD

 

 

Despite that one error (at least I think it's in error), your feedback was really helpful! I hope to receive feedback from you in future threads.

[lolwhy]

o.o I though it says become 1500 not gains 1500

 

Win.

[-Athena-]

o.o I though it says become 1500 not gains 1500

 

Become would make much more sense.

[Grifith]

No, YugiNoobie the ATTRIBUTE is the symbol in the top-right hand corner that says WATER, not the cards type. You are talking about card types not Attributes.

[YugiNoobie]

No' date=' YugiNoobie the ATTRIBUTE is the symbol in the top-right hand corner that says WATER, not the cards type. You are talking about card types not Attributes.

[/quote']

 

 

-Facepalm- Yes I know, I`m sorry, '(Insert Attribute type here) was a poor wording typo. I already edited the post to say (Insert monster type here)-Type. If you see in the spoilers, I also added what I was refering to from the lore.It's a bit confusing but if you go back to the spoilers and look inside them you will see what I mean.

 

I`m sorry for the hassle.

[Rampage567]

Pretty good card, except its machine type. 9/10.

[Zextra]

Small OCG errors, as pointed out above. Nice for a first card. Effect is UP'ed, though; 1500 ATK and DEF monsters are too weak to put in any normal deck. Still, nice concept, and good luck with your card making! 9/10

[Blackmetal]

think its really good for the firstt card but i think it should be lv 4

im not an expernt eighter ;)

8/10

[stormmonarch]

The OCG needs work. I think this may help

"If you do not control another WATER monster, this card's original ATK and DEF become 1500 each."

With this effect, the monster's level can be 2 or 3, since Tune Warrior (LV3) has 1600 ATK.