A new "Elf" set, rate and add input! (Deck is almost complete, even more cards have been added!)

[Manpole]

For the past few hours I've been making these cards, and I plan on finishing this set (into a deck) in the next few days... what do you think of them so far?

 

Update: Added cards... "Dark Elf Queen", "Sanctuary", "Witch Elf", "Spell Return", and some card effect changes/alters.

 

Update: Added cards... "Elf King", "Elf Scout", "Elven Alliance", "Elven Forester", "Dark Elven Prince", "The Mad Forest", "The Magic Forest", "Rose Sword", and "Growing Barrier"

 

Update: Added cards... "The Kind Forest", "Captured Reflection", "Searching", and some card effect changes/alters.

 

Monsters:

 

Spells:

 

Traps:

 

Deck is basically complete now! Just a few more to make!

[123dinobay]

some good pics :) keep making more cards

[Tricksy]

OCG is.. alright but outdated. keep makin cards and get better. 7/10

[Prince of Tennis]

Since you PM'ed me, I'll give you a card by card response

 

SPECIAL NOTE: I DID NOT GIVE MY RATINGS OUT ON BASIS OF OCG ONLY ON EFFECTS

 

For All: Pics match the cards names so you get 10/10 for that.

 

Battle Elf: Simple but useful effect, a good 3 star monster 9/10

Dark Elf: 1st Part of the effect is okay at best (because what if your Opponent has no Spell Cards?), but I love the second part 7/10

Dark Elf Queen: Useful effect, I like that you can choose ATK gain or Spell/Trap Destroy 10/10

Elf Goddess Syriel: I think this effect is a little OPed, I know you put the Next End Phase to limit it, but what if you have 3 spell cards you use thats +900 6.5/10

Elf Socerer Gladis I think that it should not be able to destroy your own spell cards, if it can it's a little OP'ed and its rating would be 7/10, but if you put something that it can only destroy your Opponent's 10/10

Elven Archer I like the idea of a Archer be able to attack your opponent directly, good effect 10/10

Elven Mage: BY FAR, my favorite so far, Burn ability + Limited Opponent Spells makes out for a great card 11/10!

Elven Warrior It could be abused, if your opponent has Contiunous S/T on the field, but I guess it's there fault for having them 8/10

Witch Elf Man, you have a knack for level 3 low attack monster LOL, I completely love this card MY NEW FAVOITE 12/10!!!

Elven Warrior Tribute restriction is good, effect is creative, but the Pic doesn't have a background 9/10

Elven Forester Way OPed make it 500 since it is a Lvl 3... 3.5/10

The Mad Forest I see this as 1 of 2 things, your deck's main defender, and support for Elven Forester and I like it 10/10

The Magic Forest Once again for a Face-up Defense Normal Summon, and the ability to gain defense 10/10

Dark Elven Prince I don't think I'm understanding this card very well, I thought the whole point of this "Deck" was to make your Opponent Activate Spells Cards, not have the Spell Cards sent to the graveyard. 5/10

Ambush I was liking this card until I saw the "3+" effect, I think it should be 5 otherwise it is OPed but I like the 1 and 2 Elf effects 6/10

Elven Temple Just your basic Archtype Field Spell, working on what the monsters effect do, in this case Spell Cards, and you can't argue with that. 10/10

Elvish Pact Nice Stall Card, but I also think you have to have at least 1 monster on your side of the field for the "Opponent Not Attacking" Effect to work like Kaiser Coliseum

Elven Alliance Trying to keep your monsters on the field instead of the graveyard, good effect 9/10

Rose Sword Your Basic Archtype Eqiup card, giving the moster an Attack boost and once again working on the spell cards 10/10

Growing Barrier I like it, limiting your Opponent's S/T 9.5/10

 

Overall: I see you put A LOT of work into these and I like how the Set Flows 9.8/10

 

Whew that took 30 minutes LOL

[Manpole]

Thanks for that input on these cards! I've already added more cards, and made some changes that you might like to older cards, check again soon and there will probably be even more cards!

[toonbob20]

Dude change your pic the freaky baby freaking me oout........>_> hes out to get me man......

[Prince of Tennis]

Updates are good 9.9/10 now

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Dude change your pic the freaky baby freaking me oout........>_> hes out to get me man......

 

Thats spam, and reported

[KishinAkira]

Effects are balanced and deal with Spells as expected.

Stats are pretty well balanced for the most part. But Dark Elven Prince is a bit OP because as long as you play a spell card each turn (Which this being Elves is entirely plausible.) your opponent will never be able to summon and defend themselves. (For the most part.) And, if he would be destroyed you could just take destroy something else instead. Maybe make him easier to destroy (lose the destroy another elf instead effect) or make his effect about no summoning a double-edged sword.

 

But, Art fits the cards well, and I still like all the ideas here (Far better than what I woulda done) So,

9/10

[Manpole]

Being a Dark Elf, I want Dark Elven Prince's second effect to match that of the other Dark Elves, where if they would be destroyed, you can instead destroy another monster... so if you think its OP maybe I could change its first effect a little* like... instead of "While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot Normal Summon a monster until their next turn if you activated a Spell card this turn." it could be... "While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot Normal Summon a monster until their next turn, if you activated a Spell card from your hand this turn."

 

Think that's better?

[Skirts]

I definitely like that all the pictures are related and are the same art style, that starts you off with a 10/10. I saw a few minor OCG errors that were out of date. I noticed that the card "Elven Warlock" is a picture from WoW (World of Warcraft), and it has no background to boot. You can easily fix the background situation with an image manipulation program (ie; GIMP, CS5/ PhotoShop) The effects are semi-creative. 7.5/10

[Manpole]

Yah I know that its from WoW, but its hard to find good images of guy Elf's... there are so many people drawing half-naked girl elves with blue hair and what-not. Anyways thanks for the criticism, and I will try to do something with that image, don't have photoshop (just paint.net and it doesn't make any sense), but I'm handy with paint* - If you couldn't tell I had to edit the pics for "Rose Sword", and "Elf King" in paint.

[Skirts]

Yah I know that its from WoW' date=' but its hard to find good images of guy Elf's... there are so many people drawing half-naked girl elves with blue hair and what-not. Anyways thanks for the criticism, and I will try to do something with that image, don't have photoshop (just paint.net and it doesn't make any sense), but I'm handy with paint* - If you couldn't tell I had to edit the pics for "Rose Sword", and "Elf King" in paint.

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I did not notice that at all. You're good with paint then haha !

[Manpole]

Any1 else have an opinion on these cards? (this deck is basically to stop and destroy your opponents Spells)

[Manpole]

Chigsweef noticed that there were a few ocg errors, can you (chigsweef) or any1 else please point out what those might be? Also... any1 else want to comment on these? ^^ thanks!

[gas2000]

i like the elfs but not the pics

[Nammac1993]

I took the time to read the monsters' effects, and there's alot of OCG errors, but I love the cards, The pics are awesome, and the effects are good, it's just the OCG that's off. But anybody's OCG is always off one way or another.

11/10

^yeah I can rate like that.

nobody's gonna stop me.

[Manpole]

Thanks for the 11/10! lol ^^ anyways, you pointed out that there were a few OCG errors, would you mind giving an example? If you can help fix even 1 card, it may help me fix a few others as well, and it will make sure I dont make that same ocg mistake in the future. Thanks!

[Manpole]

Bumpable bump..?