Junk Yard

[tommers2008]

This is a card i made for a contest, where i had to support Junk Decks.

 

Rate, Review, Comment, e.t.c

 

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Effect - When you activate this card you can add 1 "Junk Synchron" to your hand from the Deck or Graveyard. Increase the ATK of all "Junk" monsters you control by 300. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand or 1 card you control to the Graveyard, to destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. When this card is removed from the field, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for each Level 4 or lower card you control and in your Graveyard.[/align]

[tommers2008]

Bump... 30 views no comment :(

[Grifith]

It's a great Junk Support card but a few minor OCG errors to fix:

 

When you activate this card you can add 1 "Junk Synchron" to your hand from the Deck or Graveyard. Increase the ATK of all "Junk" monsters you control by 300. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand or sacrifice 1 card you control to the Graveyard, to destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each Level 4 or lower card you control and in your Graveyard.

 

I hope I helped, also I hoped I'm giving correct OCG fixes.

 

 

My rating, 8.9/10

[tommers2008]

@ - Grifith

 

Thanks for comment, but you totally failed with OCG correction, you are using old OCG terms.

 

Thanks for the rate as well.

[tommers2008]

bump..

[The Great Wolf Sif]

I like it but 300 per level 4 or lower in your grave and on the field?

WOW my suggestion get rid of the burn because it can easily equals too much.

4 monsters = 1200 burn!!!

8 monsters = 3400 burn!!!!

12 monsters = 4600 burn!!!!! in other words the burn builds too quick.

 

And instead of sacrifice it should be "send 1 card you control to the Graveyard".

 

any ways though my rating is a 7/10 fix OCG and the BURN!!!!! By the way anyone who tells me that the burn is all right seriously needs to think about that.

[jakkk1k93]

SWEET!!!

[tommers2008]

I like it but 300 per level 4 or lower in your grave and on the field?

WOW my suggestion get rid of the burn because it can easily equals too much.

4 monsters = 1200 burn!!!

8 monsters = 3400 burn!!!!

12 monsters = 4600 burn!!!!! in other words the burn builds too quick.

 

And instead of sacrifice it should be "send 1 card you control to the Graveyard".

 

any ways though my rating is a 7/10 fix OCG and the BURN!!!!! By the way anyone who tells me that the burn is all right seriously needs to think about that.

 

I never said sacrifice. And the burn isn't once per turn' date=' so people would probably try to get rid of this early. And also i can't see there being too many level 4 or lower in the grave certainly not 12 anyway despite that i may lower it to 200.

 

SWEET!!!

 

Thanks but thats spam.