My First Cards - Power of Enigma

[Futility is Resistant]

This is a set which I will gradually add to with time. However, here I have my first cards, and I need some comments and criticism. Mostly with OCG. I suck at OCG.

 

[spoiler=Monsters]

 

Lore:

 

Amphibious Hybrid: This card can only be Summoned or Set if a Field Spell Card is in play. If a new Field Spell Card is played send this card to the Graveyard. When this card is on your field all Monsters on your field are unaffected by the Field Spell Card in play.

 

Gargantav - God of Worlds: "Field Sentry" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card can be equipped with Field Spell Cards. A Field Spell Card equipped to this monster has its effect negated. Increase this cards ATK points by 500 for every Field Spell Card equipped to it. As long as this card remains face-up on the field Field Spell Cards can not be destroyed. When this card is sent to the Graveyard destroy all Field Spell Cards on the field and discard all Field Spell Cards from both players' hands.

 

[spoiler=Spells]

 

[spoiler=Traps]

 

[cRAGLE 62]

OCG for Amphibious Hybrid:

This card can only be Summoned or Set if there is a face-up Field Spell in play. If a Field Spell is activated while this card is face-up on the field, send this card to the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, all monsters you control are unaffected by the effects of Field Spell cards.

I think that's right.

I quite like the first card's ability of not being affected by field spells, but its quite hard to get out in most meta decks, so to balance that maybe make it a level 4 with about 1600 ATK?

Overall: 6/10

Good try

[Grifith]

These cards are great for your first, I like Amphibious Hybrid's effect it makes it to where if your opponent for example has a Spellcaster and uses a Field spell to increase it ATK by 200 and it had 800 ATK this card would make sure that the Spellcaster can be owned by this cardm there are endless possiblities this effect could do. This card would lead me to victory because, most of the people I duel use mostly Field Spells to increase the ATK and DEF of their n00by cards.

 

I can see that this is a great root for a new set.

 

 

Keep up the good work! 9.7/10

[Blackmetal]

i think they are cool but dont write "on your field". Write "on your side of the field"

good work dude 6/10 ;)

[Futility is Resistant]

cRAGLE 62: Thanks, I'll change the OCG. And on the topic of attack, I wasn't really sure what to do for that, so I'll take your advice and up it a bit.

 

Grifith: I think your slightly misunderstanding the card. It only effects monsters on YOUR side of the field. This way, if you use it with Nightmare Docks, if one of your monsters has 1800 ATK points, and your opponent's has 2600, your opponent's will drop to 1600, but yours will stay the same.

 

Blackmetal: Isn't "on your side of the field" old OCG?

 

Anyway, thanks for all the reviews guys.

[Rehva]

Boring Effects -_- Ok. You need to work on making your Cards More Original. I don't know.. Maybe Make a Longer Effect? Look at A REAL TCG Yugioh card and try to get Ideas from it.

 

Originality = 4/10

Effects = 4/10

OCG = 6/10

Pictures = 5/10

Overall = 5.5/10

[Grifith]

I must have, thanks for correcting me.

[Futility is Resistant]

I actually find it funny that you gave my OCG the highest rating. Not that I'm gonna argue, it's just I thought I sucked at that. On the topic of originality, Nightmare Docks effect is supposed to be quite short, as that is all there really is to it. It is meant to work with Amphibious Hybrid, which in my opinion has a quite original effect.

 

Thanks for the help anyway though.

[Rehva]

Naw.. Your OCG's fine to me. Just work on your Effects :3 YOU SHALL RECEIVE A REP. You'll become a Great Card maker ;3

[Futility is Resistant]

Thanks Raze

 

Three new cards added, including the first trap. It's kind of obvious that the set focuses on Field Spell Cards.

[Futility is Resistant]

OK, I've added the main card, which happens to be the only Synchro monster (plus the Tuner). I'll need a little bit of help with OCG as I found it a bit hard to word. Comments would really be appreciated.