123dinobay Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 ima newb so please cut some slack otherwise hope you like my cards ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 You posted the same card twice, the effects are too bland, your OCG needs work, and Koruko is overpowered. Hotaka: By discarding 1 card, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. Kentoi: This card gains 500 ATK for each face-up "Elemental Warrior" on the field. Koruko: When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 You got some good card's here but they need a few OCG fixes and here they are: Hotaka:If you discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, these card can attack your opponent twice this turn. Kentoi:This card's ATK is increased by 500 for each Face-Up "Elemental Warrior" on the field. Koruko:When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field. ------------------------------------------------------- I like them, it be great to see more. My rating, 9.6/10 @Midnight_Loner: You have bad OCG corrections. Learn your OCG before correcting it, but I do agree the third card is OP. ------------------------------------------------------- You added a new one, let's see what you got. You OCG have some errors that I can fix: During your Main Phase, increase your Life Points by 200 for each "Elemental Warrior" on your side of the field and in your Graveyard. -------------------------------------------------------- I hope I helped you out some. PS- If you ever need help with anything just PM me and I'll try to help out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123dinobay Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Thank You for the OCG corrections fixed them and thanks for the ratings and how do you think I should fix my OP card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 You got some good card's here but they need a few OCG fixes and here they are: Hotaka:If you discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard' date=' these card can attack your opponent twice this turn.[b']Possibly.[/b]Kentoi:This card's ATK is increased by 500 for each Face-Up "Elemental Warrior" on the field.No.Koruko:When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field.I referenced Giant Rat and UFOroid.------------------------------------------------------- I like them, it be great to see more. My rating, 9.6/10 @Midnight_Loner: You have bad OCG corrections. Learn your OCG before correcting it, but I do agree the third card is OP.No. Just no.------------------------------------------------------- You added a new one, let's see what you got. You OCG have some errors that I can fix: Once per turn, increase your Life Points by 200 for each "Elemental Warrior" on your side of the field and in your Graveyard. ------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123dinobay Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 I'm gunna add a new one in just a sec its dark type... what should its effect be???I'm gunna add a new one in just a sec its dark type...what should its effect be???I'm gunna add a new one in just a sec its dark type... what should its effect be???I'm gunna add a new one in just a sec its dark type...what should its effect be??? NVM I made an effect tell me if you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 OK your Op one needs to be where the effect only destroys 1 Spell or Trap card for maybe the cost of 200 Life Points. --------------------------------- I like the new ones, but I didn't read there effects the picture is nice and so are there names, I'll try to fix your OCG later, but i'm doing other stuff. --------------------------------- Keep making more, this would be a great new set. --------------------------------- @Midnight_Loner: On my second part in my post why did you write "No. Just no." is it because, my opinion for the new people is good and I'm honest about what i say, or are you just being an @$$ to people who tell you to work on your OCG, if you can look at other posts you'll notice i give good ratings to everybody minimum rating would be a 4 or 3.8... So stop giving negative feedback on the new peoples posts because, if you give bad ratings and etc. you'll discourage them to make more, but since you have an attention span of a fly you probably didn't read this. NOTE: This is not offensive to people trust me, I know!!!- ---------------------------------- @Dinobay: Would you like for me to add you to my Buddy List because I will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123dinobay Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 OK your Op one needs to be where the effect only destroys 1 Spell or Trap card for maybe the cost of 200 Life Points. --------------------------------- I like the new ones' date=' but I didn't read there effects the picture is nice and so are there names, I'll try to fix your OCG later, but i'm doing other stuff. --------------------------------- Keep making more, this would be a great new set. --------------------------------- @Midnight_Loner: On my second part in my post why did you write "No. Just no." is it because, my opinion for the new people is good and I'm honest about what i say, or are you just being an @$$ to people who tell you to work on your OCG, if you can look at other posts you'll notice i give good ratings to everybody minimum rating would be a 4 or 3.8... So stop giving negative feedback on the new peoples posts because, if you give bad ratings and etc. you'll discourage them to make more, but since you have an attention span of a fly you probably didn't read this. NOTE: This is not offensive to people trust me, I know!!!- ---------------------------------- @Dinobay: Would you like for me to add you to my Buddy List because I will.[/quote'] Add me to your buddy list!! :) TY for defending me but nomatter what he says i'm gunna just keep making new cards... also i'm gunna pm you some more cards that I for this set... and fyi almost all these pic aren't mine there HPDooms and ppl he lists on his archive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Okay I'm adding you now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123dinobay Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 How do i exept it???? or what??? I'm gunna PM you 6 new sequal to the elemental warrior cards... :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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