Asifsaj Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 life points ang graveyard should be in caps > Life Points, Graveyard just thats the errors, i love 1st card pics, but not the other.. thats preetty creative for a new member , so i'll give you 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 ocg has been pointed out. not bad for a newbie. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Yup, not bad at all. OCG errors have been corrected. My only suggestion is to increase the drawback/cost, because 100 Life Points is way too little to add any monster to your hand.Still, not bad 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Normal Summon is in caps as well. may = can, every=each, deck=DeckI like 1st and 2nd pic but not the vanilla one.Don't make normal monsters as most important part of the card is the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 I don't think the vanilla is supposed to be part of the set; that's his member card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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