My First Card, Lavatic Bouldosaur |Awesomest|

[~ XxAwesomestxX ~]

Hey this is my first card, hope you like it.

 

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)

When this card is Synchro Summoned, switch all other monsters on the field to Defense Position. Monsters that are switched to, and are already in Defense Position when this card is Summoned, cannot change their positions until your 3rd End Phase after this card was Summoned and only by a card effect. Whenever a monster is destroyed while in Defense Position inflict 300 damage to your opponent for every other Defense Position monster on the field. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can instead remove from play 1 Defense Position monster you control.

[Ghoulish]

your OCG is surprisingly good especially for a new member, pic is good, effect is really quite original, i like it good job, looking forward to seeing more cards from you.

[~ XxAwesomestxX ~]

thx =) i'll be posting more cards soon

[.area51player.]

Seriously, this is way TOO good for a new member '-'. I'm not accusing you, but I could say you are a double. Anyway, it's awesome.

 

Where'd you get this pic?

[Phantom M.C.]

picture is awesome 9/10. but its way op, according to your description right now, your opponent takes damage for EVERY defense position monster destroyed, even if its your monster thats destroyed?

[~ XxAwesomestxX ~]

Corinz, i've been playing yugioh all my life just about, i just regularly check the standard of official cards and try to go from that. Before i joined my friend told me a to go to Jazin Kay's archive for good pics, so yea from there lol. Galadrien you lose 300 for every other defence position monster on the field, not every monster that has been destroyed that was in defence position. Thx for the comments though =).

[CMRenji]

Whoa, great card. 9.8/10 and a Rep!

[Ben1005]

Seems like the effect is all about defense and for good reason!There's something that's not right about the OTC,but I can't figure out what it is,though.

 

Good job!

[.Impact]

i personally dont find the pic all that great. ocg is solid enough (i guess) some minor errors here and there. but the ccard itself is very overpowered. lets think about this ok?

 

ur opponent 3 monsters on the field you 3 monsters on the field.

 

this turn u normal summon. then u synchro summon using two of the 4 that u have now to get this card on the field.

so thats a total of 5 monsters in defense position. u destroy one and they take either 1500 or 1200 because u didnt specify if u counted the destroyed monster or not. That almost a third of there life points. and since they cant be changed to attack. this is basically a 3 turn win card.

 

do u see what im getting at. maybe change it up a bit to make it less powerful. maybe even 200 damage will do it.

[Phantom M.C.]

i personally dont find the pic all that great. ocg is solid enough (i guess) some minor errors here and there. but the ccard itself is very overpowered. lets think about this ok?

 

ur opponent 3 monsters on the field you 3 monsters on the field.

 

this turn u normal summon. then u synchro summon using two of the 4 that u have now to get this card on the field.

so thats a total of 5 monsters in defense position. u destroy one and they take either 1500 or 1200 because u didnt specify if u counted the destroyed monster or not. That almost a third of there life points. and since they cant be changed to attack. this is basically a 3 turn win card.

 

do u see what im getting at. maybe change it up a bit to make it less powerful. maybe even 200 damage will do it.

 

thank you for writing this down, that was what i was thinking too (but i was too lazy to post it)

[-Athena-]

I can spot some OCG errors but I'll let it slide (since you're new). The picture and name is good. I love the idea of the effect and I must admit this is an awesome card (new or old). I'm just happy to see a new member who knows how to make a synchro card. Some new members just make them because the white border looks 'cool'.

 

Anyways, keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to your next card :). 9.5/10.

[arcfigter]

Its pretty good. minor ocg errors and a start for a defensive deck. 9/10

[~ XxAwesomestxX ~]

thx for the comments and good rates everyone=) i really appreciate it.

 

Auxiliry, I see what you mean I might do that actually reduce the damge done to 200 for every card intead, thx for the advice everyone.

[Kato_Zenamara]

A minor, confuzzling OCG error:

"Monsters cannot change their battle position until your 3rd end phase after this card's activation, or by card effect."

 

Also, yeah, the effect is a little OPed. Make it so that whoever controls the DEF position monster takes the damage.