My first card, Comments and Critiques welcome

[Molecular]

Hello, YCM Community. As you can see, I am new to this forum, but not to the Yu-Gi-Oh! Trading Card Game. After experimenting with Card Maker, I've made my first card.

Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 LIGHT and 2 DARK Monsters. This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap Cards. When this card destroys a Monster, destroyed Monster is removed from play after Damage Calculation. Only once, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to number of cards removed from play x 100

[cRAGLE 62]

I quite like it. No OCG errors as far as I can see, but maybe slightly OP'ed because of not being affected by Spells and Traps. Also, I can see the amount of damage being dealt going to 3000+ in a D.D deck, so could get slightly ridiculous lol

8.8/10

[Molecular]

I quite like it. No OCG errors as far as I can see' date=' but maybe slightly OP'ed because of not being affected by Spells and Traps. Also, I can see the amount of damage being dealt going to 3000+ in a D.D deck, so could get slightly ridiculous lol

8.8/10

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Yes, I realized it after I posted. I will edit it and post it again.

EDIT: Here is weakened version.

Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 LIGHT and 2 DARK Monsters. This card is unaffected by Spell Cards. When this card destroys a Monster, destroyed Monster is removed from play after Damage Calculation. Only once, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to number of cards removed from play x 50

[Phantom M.C.]

Wow, thats really good for your first try. 8/10

[firetire18]

its a decent card 6/10