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spartin45

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First of all. You don't put parenthesis on Synchro. That's a really big an annoying mistake.

Just put 1 Tuner + 1 non-Tuner monster then press enter to go to the next line, then write the effect.

 

You need to learn when to capitalize. I mean common sense, capitalize the first letter of a sentence. And some picture are overused... The names are white, and the frame is white, that means I cannot read it. Change that. And the effects are very simple.

 

Anyways, sorry for all of that "mean" talk, on to the good stuff :).

 

I kinda like the idea. It seems like you're starting the engine but the engine won't turn on. You gotta try harder to make it turn on.

 

So keep trying :). 6/10. And I'm sorry for typing so much.

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