Levister Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 here is my dragon set so far (dragon seal-ritual card)Lore:This card can only be ritual summoned by the card "dragon seal".The father of 2 dragons ,one of light and one of dark, will try to stop the fight over ruling the world by destroying them both and he will make the 3 dragons of the heavens store the 2 dragons essences away for good(dragon of light)Lore:The sister of the darkness dragon has banashed her brother from the world and he vanished to the underworlds to live in the dark and oneday he will rise again tring to gain the power of the world again and put it into darkness and chaos.(dragon of darkness)Lore:When all darkness has ceased from the world the darkness will once arrive again when the dragon of darkness has destroyed his sister the dragon of light and for all of the dragons life darkness will fill the world with chaos(dark heaven dragon)Lore:This card can only be ritual summoned by the card "dragon seal".The father of 2 dragons ,one of light and one of dark, will try to stop the fight over ruling the world by destroying them both and he will make the 3 dragons of the heavens store the 2 dragons essences away for good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 ocg fix:only add the background story of the card if it is a normal monster, if it is an effect monster, only add the effect. for dragon seal: (you posted the wrong lore)This card is used to Ritual Summon "Dark Heaven Dragon". You must also Tribute a "Dragon of Light" and "Dragon of Darkness" from the field or your hand. for dragon of light:misspelled "banished", "trying", for dark heaven dragon:remake the card since you're new i'll give you a 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 ocg fix:only add the background story of the card if it is a normal monster' date=' if it is an effect monster, only add the effect. for dragon seal: (you posted the wrong lore)This card is used to Ritual Summon "Dark Heaven Dragon". You must also Tribute a "Dragon of Light" and "Dragon of Darkness" from the field or your hand. for dragon of light:misspelled "banished", "trying", for dark heaven dragon:remake the card since you're new i'll give you a 5/10[/quote'] i agree about the background storynow the pics are pretty interesting, especially Dark Heaven Dragonexcept i think for the "Darkness Dragon" it needs to be a black dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 i agree about the background storynow the pics are pretty interesting' date=' especially Dark Heaven Dragonexcept i think for the "Darkness Dragon" it needs to be a black dragon[/quote'] it is black..........right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 okay there are good some minor set backs that have been mentioned and finaly 3 of those pics are overused so try and find some dif pics but any way nice cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FUNE Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 some ocg errors, medium pics6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 i agree about the background storynow the pics are pretty interesting' date=' especially Dark Heaven Dragonexcept i think for the "Darkness Dragon" it needs to be a black dragon[/quote'] it is black..........right? oh i meant on his "Dark Heaven Dragon" if its gonna be a combo of Darkness and Light, it needs to be Black and White not Fiery and White Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 some pics are overused..some OCG errors..other than those 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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