·Toot Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 [align=center]here is my card [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 face-up FIRE monster on your side of the field from play. Once per turn you can pay 600 Life Points to have all FIRE monsters on your side of the field gain 1000 ATK and DEF until the End Phase. If you activate that effect, this card cannot declare an attack this turn. How Is It?OCG Fixes Appreciated[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jijifinn Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 i say its good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 thnx dood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 I think it's nice, has a good picture and it's somewhat HQ, here is one tiny OCG fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 face-up FIRE monster on your side of the field from play. Once per turn you can pay 600 Life Points to have all FIRE monsters on your side of the field gain 1000 ATK and DEF until the End Phase. If you activate this effect, this card cannot declare an attack this turn. That's the small thing that I saw, but anyways... My rating... 996,000 / 1,000,000 ---------------------------------------- I rated out of one-million... Weird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 thnx dood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Once per turn, you can...That's one tricky comma you missed there :D The boosting effect seems overpowered. Maybe increased by 500 is better. And you can drop the ATK to 2400-2500 of something. 8.5/10Good luck on the contest! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 thnx dood/doodette Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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