LeviLaurie Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 here they arePlease Rate Updated All Of Them!! =3 enjoy Please feed mah pets if you dont mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 pretty good. As with many come-backs, you've got some ocg errors. I like them overall. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeviLaurie Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 pretty good. As with many come-backs' date=' you've got some ocg errors. I like them overall. 7/10[/quote'] whats ocg ? lol can u tell me how to fix? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 These are pretty nice. Some of them sound a little joke-ish *cough cough* Watemelon), but they're still good. Good luck!7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 work on your OCG and we'll talk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterbubu69 Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 That Winged Sea-Horse is cool. It looks like something you'd pull from a Tournament Pack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeviLaurie Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 work on your OCG and we'll talkwhats ocg? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 ocg=Overall(some call it "official") Card Grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeviLaurie Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 ohh what would you fix? on which card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 On watermelon, change "summoner" to "controller of this card". Change "gets" to "gains". and at the beginning change "is" to "are". That should be all the major stuff. The other 2 are okay if you don't go nitty-gritty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeviLaurie Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 On watermelon' date=' change "summoner" to "controller of this card". Change "gets" to "gains". and at the beginning change "is" to "are". That should be all the major stuff. The other 2 are okay if you don't go nitty-gritty.[/quote'] thank you! =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeviLaurie Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 bummpppp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeviLaurie Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 bummpyUpdated =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 monkey queen- "this card CAN ONLY BE NORMAL summoned OR sET if there ARE at least 1 'monkey' on the field". 'Playing the other field"-If YOUR OPPONENT is attacked, etc." Good work and check out my friendly foes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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