kid Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 please rate and give half the credit to tallman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 You didn't change "on" to "one" like I said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 please rate and give half the credit to tallman 1 not one usually battle, opponent's 1 not on activated Warrior Writing in picture needs removing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Bad OCG, some things need to be capatalized."When this card is Summoned, select 1 Trap card in your Deck and add it to your hand. When this card is destroyed in battle,destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. The monsterdestroyed by this effect has it's effect negated." A little overpowered, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 i know about the spelling mistakes now:shock: and ill take the writing off right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 please rate and give half the credit to tallman 1 not one usually battle' date=' opponent's 1 not on activated Warrior Writing in picture needs removing.[/quote'] I think you missed something.Trpa Card (correct me if I'm wrong.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Yeah sorry about that kid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 i got my headache because of school ill change it right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 well its pretty good just a few errors thoughi like the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 oh yeah and that too ^_^ good one arpee ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 thanks ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 oh yeah and that too ^_^ good one arpee ^_^ I got your back. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 It's n OK card. I kind of like the pic, but the ocg is off =/7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 the picture is way way overused people. and KID improve your OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 The picture is pretty cool, but you can work on your grammar. Good job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 You misspelled assassin. Good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARMCARDMAKER22 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 its actually a good card nice job, just look out for spelling mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Bad OCG, OCC and OCS but pic and effect is alright just effect could improve a bit. 4.01/5.1:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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