THE ULTIMATE CARD THAT CONTROLS THE EARTH!!! (PLZ COMMENT)

[Phantom M.C.]

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dawn of Earth". This card's ATK and DEF become equal to the number of cards in both players hand and Graveyard x 100. Once per turn, you can either Special Summon a non-fusion, non-synchro, non-ritual monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard in Face-up Defense Position, or select a Star Level and Special Summon a random monster of the Star Level from your opponent's hand, Deck or Graveyard in Face-up Attack Position (under your control), the Special Summoned monsters cannot attack the turn they are summoned. Pay the Total Level Stars of the monster x 100 Life Points to Activate this effect. The turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack. This card cannot be removed from the field (Damage Calculation is applied).

 

Lore: Once per turn, pay 600 Life Points (if you do not, remove this card from play). Add 1 Creation Counter to this card (max. 6). Remove 6 Creation Counters to Special Summon "Sangue - The Master Puppeteer" from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position, remove this card from play. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you cannot activate any other Spell or Trap Cards. This card is unaffected by other Spell and Trap Cards.

[Sylphiend]

Hmmm, this card is really hard to judge...

I'd say 7.5/10

[judedudemude]

great card

 

but still have a few weak points

01. problem to dawn of the earth spell can be destroy by effect monsters (most likely a flip effect)

02. then you oppernet can end the duel be fore the 6th counter

03. removing from play cards to insure the monster will be weak

 

i guess since it a powerful card it got to have it drawbacks

(like i just mention)

[Kato_Zenamara]

You realize the way you misworded the effect of the Puppeteer makes the whole combo diminished. You made the effect mandatory rather than optional, so it lasts two turns... then what? If you can't activate a mandatory effect, what will happen to this card?

 

Also, the whole proccess and results are OP'ed as hell. Yes, it takes 3600 lp, but your opponent's chances at destroying the spell are 1/3, since traps and spell won't work, so only monster effects have a chance. On top of that, the ATK gaining effect can be easily exploited. For examples sake, lets say you've each got the standard 5 cards in hand. Thats 1000 ATK and DEF right there, not counting graveyards. Lets say you've each got 10 cards in your graveyards, bringing it up to 3000 ATK and DEF. Stick this mother in a Lightsworns deck and you've pretty much got an OTK, not to mention its insta-Blue Eyes with its effect.

[Phantom M.C.]

You realize the way you misworded the effect of the Puppeteer makes the whole combo diminished. You made the effect mandatory rather than optional' date=' so it lasts two turns... then what? If you can't activate a mandatory effect, what will happen to this card?

 

Also, the whole proccess and results are OP'ed as hell. Yes, it takes 3600 lp, but your opponent's chances at destroying the spell are 1/3, since traps and spell won't work, so only monster effects have a chance. On top of that, the ATK gaining effect can be easily exploited. For examples sake, lets say you've each got the standard 5 cards in hand. Thats 1000 ATK and DEF right there, not counting graveyards. Lets say you've each got 10 cards in your graveyards, bringing it up to 3000 ATK and DEF. Stick this mother in a Lightsworns deck and you've pretty much got an OTK, not to mention its insta-Blue Eyes with its effect.

[/quote']

 

this is the ultimate card. and also, you have to pay 500 lp to summon monsters.

 

i changed it a bit: so now its not mandatory, the special summoned monster is in def position

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dawn of Earth". This card's ATK and DEF become equal to the number of cards in both players hand and Graveyard x 100. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points, and Special Summon a monster whose Total Level Stars is equal to 8 or less from either player's hand or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position under your control. The turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack. This card cannot be removed from the field (Battle Damage is applied).

[Phantom M.C.]

...........am i really that hated? plz give your opinions on my card

[Phantom M.C.]

BUMP

[~Duo~]

This is really OP because it can't be destroyed, it Summons almost anything every turn, and not attacking is too little of a drawback. Plus, either player's hand? How will you know? And that is extremely OP. OP'd but unique. 6/10

[manalord]

i really like how it needs 6 turns to actavite because that card can become unbeatble fast.

[lookatthatawesomecard15]

very oringinal. It is a bit of a confusing card. I say 8/10.

[CMRenji]

Nice card. Seems pretty balanced. 8.9/10

[~Duo~]

Even "Dawn of Earth" is OP, 'cuz only monster effects can destroy it. I just noticed that.

[Phantom M.C.]

thx for all the feedback guys, i updated both of the cards, and modified the drawbacks and effects. but now the ocg is completely messed up due to the amount of originality, plz help me!!!! :D

[Phantom M.C.]

BUMP

[windninja96]

a bit op'ed but it is origianal and the pics are awesome

[Phantom M.C.]

a bit op'ed but it is origianal and the pics are awesome

 

thank you, could you explain how its op? it seems pretty balanced to me

[Phantom M.C.]

BUMP

....................still waiting

[Phantom M.C.]

RATE MY CARDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[UrWorstNightmare009]

This looks a little OP'd to me. Pics are good, OCG needs a touchup, so my rating 7.9/10

[Phantom M.C.]

This looks a little OP'd to me. Pics are good' date=' OCG needs a touchup, so my rating 7.9/10

[/quote']

 

thank you, and yes i know the ocg sucks, thats why i've been bumping this thread. and could you specify why its op?

[UrWorstNightmare009]

This looks a little OP'd to me. Pics are good' date=' OCG needs a touchup, so my rating 7.9/10

[/quote']

 

thank you, and yes i know the ocg sucks, thats why i've been bumping this thread. and could you specify why its op?

 

"This card cannot be removed from the field"

 

That seems OP'd to me.

[έκλειψη]

OP.

 

Sure, you can kill the Spell Card with a monster effect, but that's unlikely. There is a certain WIND monster that kills this combo, but whatever.

 

Now, we have out Perfectly Ultimate Great moth out! (6 turns). I have ATK equal to... # of cards everywhere but your Deck x100. I Demolish Lightsworns and-- Oh, BTW. I can Summon whatever from your Deck. I'll just say Level 10 each time and bring out some pretty strong stuff, or Level 8 to be nice... Now, I've pretty much won, so... Kthxbai.

[Phantom M.C.]

OP.

 

Sure' date=' you can kill the Spell Card with a monster effect, but that's unlikely. There is a certain WIND monster that kills this combo, but whatever.

 

Now, we have out Perfectly Ultimate Great moth out! (6 turns). I have ATK equal to... # of cards everywhere but your Deck x100. I Demolish Lightsworns and-- Oh, BTW. I can Summon whatever from your Deck. I'll just say Level 10 each time and bring out some pretty strong stuff, or Level 8 to be nice... Now, I've pretty much won, so... Kthxbai.

[/quote']

 

thank you for your comment. i did make this card to be an OTK, so is there a way to do this and still make it balanced?

[έκλειψη]

You can OTK without just taking monsters from your opponent's Deck. Waiting six turns is already a price to pay, but it's not worth this. Perhaps have this depend on some other cards you can make? Few OTK's only use one card.

[Phantom M.C.]

You can OTK without just taking monsters from your opponent's Deck. Waiting six turns is already a price to pay' date=' but it's not worth this. Perhaps have this depend on some other cards you can make? Few OTK's only use one card.

[/quote']

 

thats why i want to make an OTK using only 1 card, i want to create an original way of OTK. maybe i can add more drawbacks to "dawn of earth" to make it balanced?

 

PEOPLE PLZ HELP OUT WITH OCG AND BALANCE!!!!