greenfoe Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylphiend Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Not bad, pic could of been better though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 "When this card destroy an opponents..." needs to be "When this card destroys an opponents..." alsospecial summon = Special Summonalsoyou don't Special Summon a monster on the field, but to the field. Otherwise you would be Special Summoning a monster that is already on the field.. back to where it was =p (change "on" to "to"alsoYou need to specify where the Special Summoned monster comes from... Graveyard, Deck, or Hand? and you need to put in each of those, if it can be Special Summoned from any of those places.and the last, smallest errorIt looks like you put an extra space after "summon" and before "1" Pretty good for one of your first cards, but its effect is pretty good, and he has 1900 ATK. I would make his ATK no more than 1700 if your going to give him an effect that good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lookatthatawesomecard15 Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 the ocg is off and the pic could be a lot better. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manalord Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 epic pic 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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