RickiMinaj Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 [align=center]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Lightsworn" monster that was sent directly from your Deck to the Graveyard. A monster Summoned this way cannot be destroyed by card effects the turn it was Summoned and cannot have its Summon negated. During the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, send the top 5 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. If "Tamus, Lightsworn Mage" is sent to the Graveyard by this cards effect, you can remove it form play instead to Special Summon 1 "Lightsworn" monster from your Graveyard.[/align] Lightsworn aid! When you lose cards from your Deck straight to the Grave, you need to get em back somehow right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince of Tennis Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Shouldn't the name be "Tamus, LightSworn Mage"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylphiend Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Well designed8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Shouldn't the name be "Tamus' date=' Light[b']S[/b]worn Mage"?OMG >.> Give it a rest, it was one small error >.> Well designed8.5/10 Thank you =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 It was 1 small error, and he pointed it out so that you could fix it...This card has a pretty good effect, but for being a level 5 with that low of an attack... I would either make him lvl 4, or increase its defense to like 2000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 I would either make him lvl 4' date=' or increase its defense to like 2000.[/quote'] Level 4 would make him easier to summon, and he's pretty easy to summon as it is. I left it low because monsters like this should not have a fighting chance. They just bring other freaks out to fight for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Yah, but how it is, you would maybe Special Summon 1 monster, then "Tamus" would get killed the next turn, before you can Special Summon anymore... which would be like, you tributed a monster to get "Tamus", just to have him bring out 1 lvl 4 monster. At least, thats why I think he is a little under powered. Maybe add an effect? He can't be selected as an Attack Target if you control another face-up Lightsworn monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 pure awesomenessonly 1 erroru put Lightworn instead of Lightsworn9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Yah' date=' but how it is, you would maybe Special Summon 1 monster, then "Tamus" would get killed the next turn, before you can Special Summon anymore... which would be like, you tributed a monster to get "Tamus", just to have him bring out 1 lvl 4 monster. At least, thats why I think he is a little under powered. Maybe add an effect? He can't be selected as an Attack Target if you control another face-up Lightsworn monster?[/quote']Ok, I'll add a can't be destroyed by battle effect pure awesomenessonly 1 erroru put Lightworn instead of Lightsworn9.5/10 Ok OK, i'll fix that >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 EDITEDEDITED[spoiler=FIX] "Graveyard. cannot be destroyed by card effects the turn it was Summoned and cannot have it's Summon negated." this is not R but it may look better this way:"Graveyard, this summon cannot be negated. A monster summoned this way cannot be destroyed by a card effect the turn it was summoned.""Graveyard by this cards effect" remove the S. The first effect is not good.This card is OP[spoiler=Because] you can summon 2 "Gragonith, Lightsworn Dragon" with its effect in 1 turn (1 when it is summoned and 1 when you send "Tamus" to the graveyard by this card effect) and give it 300 ATK and DEF (because "Gragonith" gets 300 ATK and DEF for each lightsworn in the graveyard). Or maybe it is not OP[spoiler=Since] you have to throw 5 cards (during the end phase by "Tamus" effect) and lose 3 monsters ("Tamus" IF YOUR OPPONENT DESTROY IT, the tribute monster for it and "Tamus" that you removed from play). Mmm... It is not OP and it gets 7.9/10. I hope that this is clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 "Graveyard. cannot be destroyed by card effects the turn it was Summoned and cannot have it's Summon negated." --> "Graveyard' date=' this summon cannot be negated. A monster summoned this way cannot be destroyd by a card effect the turn it is summoned" looks better ? if not do not change it."Graveyard by this cards effect" --> "Graveyard by this card effect" NOT DESTROYED BY BATTLE ?!! no bad idea. It is OP becuase you can summon 2 lightsworn dragon with its effect and give it 300 attack and the first one can realy make some damage but maybe not becuase you have to throw 5 cards and lose 3 monsters....It is not OP and it gets 7.9/10.[/quote'] I'm sorry, I don't quite understand the way you talk, nor your grammar. But There is no such card called Lightsworn dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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