Brian marshall Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 i fix the card text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 for the first and the second one pic is not good, and for the first one, was caps lock locked?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Card 1 Bad blurry picture, needs replacing. You do not write in caps grammar maybe bad, but cannot tell. OCG is a lil off Card 2 Bad picture, needs replacing Spelling errors grammar errors OCG errors. You need to go over your cards again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian marshall Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 its just a card its going to be like that if i ever want them to make it and teh reason why there caps cause before they where to small to see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Have you read the realistic sections rules? ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Yeah, we get to say what we want. anyway, it's not too grea, can you please use img codes?3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Well the idea of the cards are pretty good, but don't right in CAPS, instead just type out the effect below the card in your post so we can just read that. Also, use bullets (edit them on Paint) or use this thing -. Also your OCG is still a bit off, more on the second one, try comparing your text to other cards. Finally, save your cards to your computer and then upload them to Tinypic.com or Photobucket.com and copy the IMG code and post that instead, that way you can automatically post the card, it is very tiresome to click links. So overall, 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian marshall Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 what is OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Official Card Grammar, its the way in which your effect is written. If your effect is not written in the 100 % exact way it would be on an official card, then thats an OCG error. If you have an OCG error it basically means you worded your effect incorrectly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian marshall Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 yea but not every card is the same in words not all fusion text are the same Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 First one and second one had really horrible ics but i liked the effects it just your not suppose to have all in caps for effect only use OCG, OCC and OCS please:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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