VANILLA ALERT: Raika, the Sealed Thunder Force

[Zextra]

Hello, everyone. This is my first and possibly my only vanilla I made. Please comment and rate! I hope it doesn't disappoint you (too much)...

 

 

Lore:

This ancient thunder deity became sealed by a dark force thousands of years ago. Nonetheless, even in his sealed state, he still demonstrates immeasurable destructive power to all that oppose him. However, he still longs for the day on which his savior will unseal him from his prison, unlocking his indomitable power. Whosoever unseals this great force will become its one and ultimate master.

 

Thanks! :D

[Smesh]

You should make some super mega ultra card to go with a name like Raika, the Sealed Thunder Force - Released

 

9/10

[~Duo~]

Great description, vanilla is tasty, good picture. You could prolly make a re-trained version, like "Obnoxious Celtic Guardian" is the re-trained version of "Celtic Guardian". 8/10

[lookatthatawesomecard15]

nice description. I do think the card should be more powerful. The name is very threatning but the card isn't.

[Atomic Nebula]

Nice vanilla. You have added that spice too the card. 8/10.

[manalord]

really long lore. 10/10

[Yang Xiao-Long]

You got the idea from me didn't you?

 

Grammar fix:

"This ancient deity of thunder was sealed by a dark force thousands of years ago. Although his power is restricted due to his sealed state, he is still able to demonstrate an immeasurable amount of destructive power to all who oppose him. Even though he has considerable power even in his sealed state, he still longs for the day in which his savior will free him from his prison, thereby unlocking his indomitable power, for legends tell that whoever unlocks his great force will become his one true master."

 

I messed around with the lore a bit, hope you don't mind.

I see a lot of potential for this card. I can't wait to see his released form.

Pic is excellent.

9.5/10

[Zextra]

If you mean the idea to post a vanilla, then yes. :D Anyways, thanks everyone for your suggestions and ratings.

btw, @ lookatthatawesomecard15, the only reason I made it somewhat weak is because

a.) The rules here at YCM state that no vanillas can be stronger than Blue-Eyes

b.) THis is him in his SEALED form :D

Still, I appreciate your comments! :D

[arcfigter]

its good. you should make an effect super edition

[KurashiDragon]

You should add a spell card that releases him much like Release restraint. That'd just make it so much better.

 

9/10: I like the card I really do but I feel the description is to long. The last part feels like it was just slapped on there.

[Zextra]

Thanks! I'll try to make support cards for this soon...

[Skirts]

Great description' date=' vanilla is tasty, good picture. You could prolly make a re-trained version, like "Obnoxious Celtic Guardian" is the re-trained version of "Celtic Guardian". 8/10

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I agree with ZetaruArc. Do a re-trained version of this card. Gaia the Fierce Knight, and Swift Gaia the Fierce knight, and the Celtic Guardian example that ZetaruArc gave is good too. This is the only goo Vanilla I have seen. 10/10

[Zextra]

Don't Worry, I will! Thanks for the comments and rating!

[windninja96]

wow.......i love the description! i always love reading descriptions

[nickstern4]

Very good card, like the description, but its a bit long winded... Still a great card... 9/10

[john3]

lol the def is wierd, not much else to say... the pic is cool

[Мερhilεs]

Like, the only good vanilla on this site. 10/10.

 

Although, I find the description/story a little too long... that's just me though.