The God of Darkness Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 I made this because I got bored but please rate it still. Lore:Once per turn roll a 6 sided die if the is result is 1 or 2 increase this cards ATK and DEF by 1000 if the result is not then you lose 500 life points(not optional). Once per turn flip a coin if its heads increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 if its tails you lose 500 life points (not optional). Once per turn place 1 Dark counter on this card when there is 6 Dark counters on this card Destroy this card and inflict halve of its ATK points to your opponents life points and special summon 2 "Goblin Tokens" (Fiend-Type/Dark/level 2/ATK 300/DEF 500). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 OCG errors. Card looks un-realistic. Picture doesn't suit the card imo. The effect is random and uses multiple types of effects. It looks like you slapped this together in a minute without thought. Again, more useless digital cardboard .. <_< >_> I can see that you're new though, so 3/10 for trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The God of Darkness Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 OCG errors. Card looks un-realistic. Picture doesn't suit the card imo. The effect is random and uses multiple types of effects. It looks like you slapped this together in a minute without thought. Again' date=' more useless digital cardboard .. <_< >_> I can see that you're new though, so 3/10 for trying.[/quote'] ya I couldn't think of which one of the effects to give it so I used them all and I couldn't find a decent pic of a goblin I'm going to remake it later when I think what effect to use only.but thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 OCG errors. Card looks un-realistic. Picture doesn't suit the card imo. The effect is random and uses multiple types of effects. It looks like you slapped this together in a minute without thought. Again' date=' more useless digital cardboard .. <_< >_> I can see that you're new though, so 3/10 for trying.[/quote'] ya I couldn't think of which one of the effects to give it so I used them all and I couldn't find a decent pic of a goblin I'm going to remake it later when I think what effect to use only.but thanks for the rating. No problem. Go check out the OCG/ Grammar thread. It'll help. Here's a +1 Rep for not complaining about a bad rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The God of Darkness Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 OCG errors. Card looks un-realistic. Picture doesn't suit the card imo. The effect is random and uses multiple types of effects. It looks like you slapped this together in a minute without thought. Again' date=' more useless digital cardboard .. <_< >_> I can see that you're new though, so 3/10 for trying.[/quote'] ya I couldn't think of which one of the effects to give it so I used them all and I couldn't find a decent pic of a goblin I'm going to remake it later when I think what effect to use only.but thanks for the rating. No problem. Go check out the OCG/ Grammar thread. It'll help. Here's a +1 Rep for not complaining about a bad rating.This better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 Ehh .. It's better. A little bland though. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 good idea. some ocg errors and puntuation is NOT optional. Halve i couldn't understand! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 -1st Card-Pic is a bit blurry. Effect is totally random. OCG is a biiiiiiiiiig fail. You don't even end sentences where you should.3.5/10-2nd Card-Pic is a bit blurry. Effect is meh. OCG fail again.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 Sorry if this is mean, but I gotta say this. The OCG is terrible. You gotta fix that up. The picture and name is okay, but you should really consider changing it. The effect is confusing so fix that up too. Overall, you need to redo this card. 4/10. Try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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