My first card

[Zane Truesdale 26]

 

Lore:1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters.

 

When this card is synchro summoned, destroy cards on the field up to the number of monsters used to synchro summoned this card.You can remove this card from play to negate the effect or attack of one monster and dstroy it.When this card is removed from play this way, you can special summon this card on your next standby face.When this card is special summoned this way, this card cannot attack for three turns.

 

Note:Im a newbie here so if you all dont like it, please tell me what i did wrong.thank you!

[arcfigter]

some grammar here and there. It may help to get a synchro and more or less copy its basic structure. You may think of combining the last line or 2 so it doesn't sound repetitive. It has a good idea for a newb. Also, why'd you look at my Gypsyon cards,x vote on the poll,x but not comment? Do you enjoy aggravating me?

[MibeR]

When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy cards on the field up to the number of Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card. You can remove this card from play to negate the effect or attack of 1 monster your opponent controls and destroy it. When this card is removed from play by this effect, Special Summon it on your next Standby Phase. It cannot attack during that turn.

 

Thats the better ocg, maybe help you out ;)

 

overall 7/10

[Zane Truesdale 26]

thanks for all your help!ill do my best to make it more realistic.

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also check my Divine deck

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-217160.html

i havent updated the deck yet and please tell me where i went wrong.

[Sylphiend]

This is really good for a first card!

[dylantop]

very nice but pic is kinda bad, digimon??

click the egg

[Zane Truesdale 26]

dont know.i just got it on the net.i basically only look on how cool the monster looks.

[Canadian]

When this card is Synchro Summoned' date=' destroy cards on the field up to the number of Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card. You can remove this card from play to negate the effect or attack of 1 monster your opponent controls and destroy it. When this card is removed from play by this effect, Special Summon it on your next Standby Phase. It cannot attack during that turn.

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This was pretty much how I thought it would be read. I actually like it's effect and the fact that its a Level 10 that needs at least 2 non-Tuners makes it balanced.

 

Personally, I think this is a fantastic first card.

 

Great job! 8/10.

[Zane Truesdale 26]

thank you for all your help. also check out my Divine deck

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-217160.html

(this deck is based on special summoning monsters and the effect of 'Divine Intervention' deals 500 points of damage everytime i special summon a monster so its some kind of a turbo/burn deck.)