Captain, we have gone off course!

[Dream Cabbage]

Here's my latest fortress card.

 

 

 

Lore: This card can be Normal Summoned without tribute. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Each time this card attacks, it's Level decreases by one and it gains 800 ATK and DEF. All Machine-Type monsters you control increase their Level by 2 while they are face-up on the field. When this card has over 2500 ATK and DEF, switch control of this card to your opponent. All of these cards' effects are negated when this card switches control.

[Sylphiend]

Hmmmmm, 7/10

[Chaos Impact™]

Hmmmmm' date=' 7/10

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indeed..... WTF Sherlock Holmes!?

 

Now to the card, it's good actually very good in fact I like the level decreasing/increasing can help with synchros. Nice way to keep it balanced with switching control.

Grade B

[Sylphiend]

"Sylphiend Wrote:

Hmmmmm, 7/10

 

indeed..... WTF Sherlock Holmes!?"

 

 

I thought it was really hard to judge this card for improvements, so I just gave my rating

[Chaos Impact™]

sorry i'm just fed up with people posting such small comments

[O.B. Palomino]

Good card, just some grammar fixes and this card is ready to rock. Maybe you give control of this card to your opponent, but you actually are giving a monster with just 0 ATK and DEF. Its good.

[Dream Cabbage]

Thanks guys