Phantom M.C. Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Found this good pic, so i made this card. Enjoy :D [align=center]Lore: Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy a monster whose DEF is less than this card's ATK. Place 1 Adrenaline Counter on this card for every monster destroyed by this effect (max. 5). The turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack. When there are 5 Adrenaline Counters on this card, send this card to the Graveyard during your End Phase and destroy all cards on the field. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Imo, pretty balanced if not just a tad o'ped, especially with the counters. But being a 5 star, with restrictions to the first effect make it pretty balanced. But not bad. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whocaresrmd Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 i would use it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Imo' date=' pretty balanced if not just a tad o'ped, especially with the counters. But being a 5 star, with restrictions to the first effect make it pretty balanced. But not bad. ^_^[/quote'] thanks for the comment i would use it glad you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windninja96 Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 amazing effect and good pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 amazing effect and good pic thx a lot :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 "Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points and destroy a monster"when you put "and" instead of "to" did you want to make the player pay no matter what, or is just a mistake ?! LP can be gained easily, add some thing with it."whose DEF is less than this card's ATK."ALOT of monsters have 1900 or less DEF and some of them are realy powerful but that powerful monster will destroy your monsters so this card can not be summoned.. only effect can get it in.. do you need to prevent it from that?...no! that is fine."The turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack."GOOD but OLD."Place 1 Adrenaline Counter for every card destroyed by this effect (max. 5)."On what ?You may want to change every to each and change this effect place so it be after the meanted effect."When there are 5 Adrenaline Counters on this card. Tribute this card to destroy all cards on the field." change it to "When there are 5 Adrenaline Counters on this card, tribute this card to destroy all cards on the field."you may want to change this into activating during your turn end or your opponent turn so this card do not give you another advance.8.3/10 great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 "Once per turn' date=' you can pay 500 Life Points and destroy a monster"when you put "and" instead of "to" did you want to make the player pay no matter what, or is just a mistake ?! [b']that was a mistake, i'll fix it[/b]LP can be gained easily, add some thing with it. i'll have to think about it"whose DEF is less than this card's ATK."ALOT of monsters have 1900 or less DEF and some of them are realy powerful but that powerful monster will destroy your monsters so this card can not be summoned.. only effect can get it in.. do you need to prevent it from that?...no! that is fine. Umm, sorry i don't really understand what you're tryin to say"The turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack."GOOD but OLD. can you plz tell me the new way?"Place 1 Adrenaline Counter for every card destroyed by this effect (max. 5)."On what ? on this card, another mistake, i'll fix it prontoYou may want to change every to each and change this effect place so it be after the meanted effect. k, i fix it now"When there are 5 Adrenaline Counters on this card. Tribute this card to destroy all cards on the field." change it to "When there are 5 Adrenaline Counters on this card, tribute this card to destroy all cards on the field."you may want to change this into activating during your turn end or your opponent turn so this card do not give you another advance. i'll specify the exact phase for this effect8.3/10 great. THANK YOU FOR THE USEFUL VERY USEFUL FEEDBACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 "Umm, sorry i don't really understand what you're tryin to say"no need to."can you plz tell me the new way?"I meant that this drawback is old but still fit this card.[spoiler=the new rate]all good exepet "you can tribute this card" so now you can choice to do not tribute it.. that is not good or is it ?9.4/10 first card to have 9 after my new rating way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 [spoiler=the new rate]all good exepet "you can tribute this card" so now you can choice to do not tribute it.. that is not good or is it ?9.4/10 first card to have 9 after my new rating way. good point, the effect might get exploited this way. i think i should change it so that its a must. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 BUMP i fixed some OCG, plz rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 BUMP fixed OCG and effects, plz rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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