my new monster (my 1st one)

[judedudemude]

 

info:

 

1 Dark Surge Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters

during your turn you can remove from play i syrcho monster in your extra deck to destory cards on your opperents side of the feild equal to number of remove played "Dark Surge monsters". during the end phase of your turn all remove "Dark Surge" monsters are move back to you graveyard and this monster is remive from play

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info on dark surge rojam mot :

this card cannot be normal summoned or set this card cannot be special summoned except by special summon from your hand remove from play 6 dark dragon monsters from your deck.if you have 1 trap card in your hand you can select one trap card in your hand then activate the trap as if you set the trap card(unless the trap card specify actavion).once per turn you can dicard a spell card to inflict damage to your opperent equal to half of this monster attack points

 

ace of my deck

[legendhiro]

you need to remember capitalization and punctuation. use real cards as examples of correct Card Grammar. the second card is ridiculously broken. the first card is better in terms of power, but is still bad in terms of grammar. keep working to improve these and to improve overall, and you will do well.

 

5/10

[~Shin~]

I

[spoiler=FIX]"1 "Dark Surge" Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters

During your turn, you can remove any number of "Dark Surge" Synchro Monsters in your Extra Deck from play to destory an equal number of cards on your opperent's side of the field. During the End Phase of the turn this effect is activated, return all removed from play "Dark Surge" monsters to your Graveyard, then remove this monster from play."

 

4/10.

The level need to go higher and the attack go lower to 2200 - 2700.

Change the type and the name say "Dark" but the monster is fire attribute !!

Still did not see the "Dark Surge" cards so no more to say.

II

[spoiler=FIX]"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 6 Dark Dragon-Type monsters in your Deck from play. While you control this card, you can activate Trap Cards from your hand. Once per turn, you can discard a Spell Card to inflict damage to your opperent equal to the half of this monster ATK."

 

5/10.

I did not understand this effect perfectly when I do I will comment the fix tall you what I understand until now.

 

I hope that my fix did not change the effect.

Do not let the low rate take you dawn.

[windninja96]

way toomany OCG erreors and PLEASE correct your spelling