Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I put two images together for the picture on this card. Constructive criticism is wanted and appreciated. Any OCG errors, please let me know ! [align=center]Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once during each of your Standby Phases, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects:● Inflict 300 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card in their hand. You cannot attack this turn.● If this card destroyed your opponent's monster as a result of battle, return 1 Spell or Trap card to your hand from your Graveyard.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 thats really op Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 a simple discard for a 3300? really? that seems balanced to you? at least is has no self preservation effect on its own, but imagine this standing next to a stardust or with a couple of counter traps down. balance it a bit better and we'll talk. 6/10.thats really op be careful of the forum rules. they call for more of a response than this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Card and Lore have been updated to make the card more balanced. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 it is still an insta-summon. fifteen hundred to pay is not much in a well built deck.also, if those three discards are somehow dark, an you somehow have this, them and dark armed in you hand at once (not that you would often) that is potentially TWO insta-summons in one turn. either way, one of its two drawbacks is also potentially very helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 it is still an insta-summon. fifteen hundred to pay is not much in a well built deck.also' date=' if those three discards are somehow dark, an you somehow have this, them and dark armed in you hand at once (not that you would often) that is potentially TWO insta-summons in one turn. either way, one of its two drawbacks is also potentially very helpful.[/quote'] Any idea's for it than ? I'm stuck on this one. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 you could change it to discard a specific type of card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Not bad. It's kinda OP so you might wanna lower the power of the effect. 7/10 :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 you could change it to discard a specific type of card my thoughts exactly, mr. i beat legendhiro to making this suggestion ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Card is updated ... Again. xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 infinitely better. now it is at roughly the level of DaD, which is okay by me ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 infinitely better. now it is at roughly the level of DaD' date=' which is okay by me ;)[/quote'] "DaD" ? xD Sorry. I don't play the TCG anymore, and I've lost touch with it. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 dark armed dragon, the most epic card since the envoys (at least in my opinion). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 dark armed dragon' date=' the most epic card since the envoys (at least in my opinion).[/quote'] I shall YWiki this. (:Thank you for the rating and the help though ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Pretty good. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Pretty good. 6.5/10 Thank you Survivor ! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 interesting, Chigs, that your summoning requirement ended up being similar to dark armed when you've never heard of him. kinda eerie, and way cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 interesting' date=' Chigs, that your summoning requirement ended up being similar to dark armed when you've never heard of him. kinda eerie, and way cool.[/quote'] I figured since he's level nine, three cards would be appropriate. xD I just YWiki'd DaD, and it's a pretty sweet card. Really hard to summon though unless you have cards that remove your monsters out of your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 there are many cards geared toward adding/removing darks in the grave in the current game. YWiki a typical deck containing him and you will see what i mean. add some similar support for this guy and he will be even more epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 there are many cards geared toward adding/removing darks in the grave in the current game. YWiki a typical deck containing him and you will see what i mean. add some similar support for this guy and he will be even more epic. What kind of support were you thinking ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 take a look at these pages and look at some of the support for DaD to get some idea of what i mean. notable cards to use for inspiration would be Armageddon Knight and Dark Grepher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 take a look at these pages and look at some of the support for DaD to get some idea of what i mean. notable cards to use for inspiration would be Armageddon Knight and Dark Grepher. I will see what I can do ! xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windninja96 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 good effect if maybe a bit op'ed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 good effect if maybe a bit op'ed That doesn't even make any sense. :/ Not to mention, you didn't even rate the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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