-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 [align=center]Okay, so this one is not a Dragon-Type monster. This is a Winged Beast-Type monster. I just found the image and it looked too cool to not make a card. The effect is kinda not original but rate anyways :). [spoiler=Oh yeah. I always like an original name so here's the meaning] Pteron=Wing or FeatherTherion=Beast [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by returning 4 cards on the field to their owner's hand. If there are no face-up monsters on the field, destroy this card. If this card is destroyed by its own effect, roll a die. Activate 1 of the following effects depending on what number was rolled:1 or 6: Pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 Level 5 or lower Monster Card on the field. During the following End Phase, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your side of the field. If there are no monster to be destroyed, you can draw 1 card.2 or 5: You can draw 1 card. If it is a Dragon-Type Monster Card, remove it from play. During you next Draw Phase, add the removed card to your hand. If it is not a Dragon-Type monster, discard the card and destroy 1 monster on your side of the field. If you do not have a monster on your side of the field, your opponent can draw 1 card.3 or 4: Your opponent gains 600 Life Points and you lose 200 Life Points. And I'm sorry for the supper long effect :(.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 It's pretty original. I like the idea of a dice roll (makes it perfect for Joey's Deck :D)The OCG is mostly good:However, you put End Phrase instead of End PhaseAnyways, keep it up!9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 "Your Side of the Field" should be "You Control". Other than that, the OCG is solid. Image is ok, but I don't care for it.Eh, it's pretty balanced. I have no complaints. 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 It's pretty original. I like the idea of a dice roll (makes it perfect for Joey's Deck :D)The OCG is mostly good:However' date=' you put End Phrase instead of End PhaseAnyways, keep it up!9.5/10[/quote'] My bad :P. But thanks for rating :). And sorry if my PMs annoy you. I just need a second opinion. "Your Side of the Field" should be "You Control". Other than that' date=' the OCG is solid. Image is ok, but I don't care for it.Eh, it's pretty balanced. I have no complaints. 8.4/10[/quote'] Thanks for rating :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 oh no they don't bother me at all! Keep it up! I look forward to seeing more! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 "Your Side of the Field" should be "You Control". Other than that' date=' the OCG is solid. Image is ok, but I don't care for it.Eh, it's pretty balanced. I have no complaints. 8.4/10[/quote'] ^This^ and "Dice" should be "Die" Nice effect, nice picture. Giving this a 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 "Your Side of the Field" should be "You Control". Other than that' date=' the OCG is solid. Image is ok, but I don't care for it.Eh, it's pretty balanced. I have no complaints. 8.4/10[/quote'] ^This^ and "Dice" should be "Die" Nice effect, nice picture. Giving this a 8.9/10 Thanks for rating :). I'll change it latter. And why give a 8.9/10 not a 9/10? Lol. You really wanna be exact don't you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 "Your Side of the Field" should be "You Control". Other than that' date=' the OCG is solid. Image is ok, but I don't care for it.Eh, it's pretty balanced. I have no complaints. 8.4/10[/quote'] ^This^ and "Dice" should be "Die" Nice effect, nice picture. Giving this a 8.9/10 Thanks for rating :). I'll change it latter. And why give a 8.9/10 not a 9/10? Lol. You really wanna be exact don't you?Fix the Die and you get a 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Very good card. Seems pretty Balanced. I like the 1860 DEF. I thought no one did that anymore. 9.7/10 Great card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Very good card. Seems pretty Balanced. I like the 1860 DEF. I thought no one did that anymore. 9.7/10 Great card. Thanks for rating :). But that's true- not alot of people do that. I was planning to put 1899 but I thought that was just weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I really like it. Its a perfect balance of "ha, beat that ATK!" and of "your own monster just helped me!" it gets a: Awesomely Perfect/ Where's the printer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 10/10 Hands down. Good job once again -Athena- ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dylantop Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 very nice cardi like the cardfew ocg8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windninja96 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 nice card......i love that you put the meaning of the name. good effect and pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I really like it. Its a perfect balance of "ha' date=' beat that ATK!" and of "your own monster just helped me!" it gets a: Awesomely Perfect/ Where's the printer?[/quote'] Haha. I like how you phrased that :) 10/10 Hands down. Good job once again -Athena- ! Thank you :). very nice cardi like the cardfew ocg8/10 Thanks. And yeah' date=' I noticed there were a few OCG errors. I'll fix them latter. nice card......i love that you put the meaning of the name. good effect and pic Thanks for rating :). I always like my cards to be original. I mean I could put Winged Beast as the name but nah. Lets be more creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshi Member Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 That was....AWESOME! Just Awesome like your member card -Athena- 10/10 and a Rep! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 That was....AWESOME! Just Awesome like your member card -Athena- 10/10 and a Rep! Thanks for the rep and the compliment :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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