-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 [align=center]Wingardium and I created these these cards. It's our first colab. cards. Rate and tell us how to improve. And it would be really nice of you to fix up our OCG errors :). [spoiler=First Card (Tuner)] Once per turn, if you have a monster with a DARK attribute on the field, you can draw 1 card from your opponent's deck. If it is a Spell Card, keep it and increase your Life Points by 500. If it is a Trap or a Monster Card, destroy 1 Level 4 or lower monster from the field, and increase your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of that card. [spoiler=Second Card (Synchro)]"Syfer's Chaos" + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, you can select 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your opponent's Graveyard, and Special Summon it onto the field. If you do, you can select and destroy 1 card on the field. The monster that was Special Summoned by the effect of this card gains x200 ATK for every "Syfer" monster(s) in your Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, you can pay 400 Life Points to Special Summon a "Syfer" monster from your deck or Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by battle, your opponent gains 400 Life Points. Credit to FW and Doomed[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Nebula Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Yup, OCG Fixes appreciated, Credit to FW and Doomed Archives for the Images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I just PM some of my friends, hope they'll rate soon. It was a pleasure working w/ you Wing :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Nebula Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 It was a pleasure working with you Athena. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whocaresrmd Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 i thought it was op'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 i thought it was op'd Can you elaborate a bit more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I really like both cards, but for the Synchro's 1st effect, you didn't specify to WHERE on the field the monster is Special Summoned TO.Pretty good OCG, balanced, and pretty creative!9/10 Good work both of you! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windninja96 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 cool cards i like the necromancer-type effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Very nice cards. But I think the Synchro is OP'd. Special Summon 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard, destroy 1 card on the field, ATK increase and the last effect makes it so it can Special Summon itself from the Graveyard. Without OP'dness it would be 9.3/10 but I give it a 8.2/10, sorry. Still great cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 OCG fixes. Pictures are good, etc etc. You know how I rate. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I think the tuner is WAY op'd. Drawing your opponent's card and judging on that? How about putting the spell at the bottom of the deck?. I think the Syncho is slightly op'd, just give it a little drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Thanks for rating everyone :)! So I noticed that it was OP'd but I'll change it latter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 "Once per turn, if you have a monster with a DARK attribute on the field, you can draw 1 card from your opponent's deck. If it is a Spell Card, keep it and increase your Life Points by 500. If it is a Trap or a Monster Card, destroy 1 Level 4 or lower monster on the field, and increase your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of that card." Very minor OCG error. Seems like an OP effect for a tuner, maybe place a summoning restriction on the turn this effect is activated? Your Synchro needs quite a bit more OCG work but I don't want to put words in your mouth since mine is also rusty (^_^). One thing I AM wondering is which side of the field you summon your opponent's monster to... 7.5/10 Overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Nebula Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 We are both working on perfecting on our OCG so putting words into our mouth is something we appreciate rather than decline.Thanks for the rates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Anymore opinions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Nebula Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Realistic Threads don't last long. +1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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