Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 With credit to my good pal 'da clown of hell' for writing my card effect ;)Hope you like my card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Umm...for starters, it's overpowered. 3200 for an 8 star? 0.0 Second, the name does not match the picture...Third, the effect is written incorrectly. "Sent to your opponent's field" is wrong. Work on that. Finally, I have seen the picture before. As of now, I will be a stricter rater.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 good card lol but the ATK could be lowered to 2800. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Writing needs to be removed from pik (small white writing at the bottom) Present?? do not, not dont im sure. what Cyber said and what clown said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 i guess any OCG fault is there, blame me on it cause i gave him an effect to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Way overpowered. 3200 and also inflicting 300 for monsters, what does this have to do with DNA anyway? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Writing needs to be removed from pik (small white writing at the bottom) Present?? do not' date=' not dont im sure. what Cyber said and what clown said.[/quote'] Ok, thanks for the comments and hey dont go so hard on me, i am still learning and i know as DJ always says you have to learn from my mistakes, he is right i know.Well when i comment on crads i always try to give the good parts about the card before giving constructive critism (If you know what i meen lol.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 We get it, but it's to help you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Way overpowered. 3200 and also inflicting 300 for monsters' date=' what does this have to do with DNA anyway?[/quote'] Well, what is has to with DNA is nothing really and thats fine for me, i was just coming up with a decent card name, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Overpowered soory luke but could imprive by a licckle bit but still great pic and effect is quite balanced 4.3/5.1:-( WELL DONE:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 I didnt know i was been hard lol if i was been hard i would say something like this.. completely horrible card and a waste of my time viewing it thats what i say when im been hard/ harsh, if i dont say it it means im been honest and normal. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 I didnt know i was been hard lol if i was been hard i would say something like this.. completely horrible card and a waste of my time viewing it thats what i say when im been hard/ harsh' date=' if i dont say it it means im been honest and normal. ^_^[/quote'] Ok, lol if you say so, your great at giving help tohugh Dj. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 my bad, but do you actually make any of your own cards? i havnt seen one, totally original, all-you card theres always 'text done by blah' or 'a card by me and blooh' make one totally down to you, with out anyones help, then change it after you've gotten comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 my bad' date=' but do you actually make any of your own cards? i havnt seen one, totally original, all-you card theres always 'text done by blah' or 'a card by me and blooh' make one totally down to you, with out anyones help, then change it after you've gotten comments[/quote'] Well yes actually i do make my own cards, i have only posted two where some people have helped me, so sort of blown out matey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 so sort of blown out matey? erm i was asking a question but if you really want me too rate your cards, give me a link to one you've actually made, cause right now i dont see why people are rating this seeing as how all u did was find an image and give it a name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 so sort of blown out matey? erm i was asking a question but if you really want me too rate your cards' date=' give me a link to one you've actually made, cause right now i dont see why people are rating this seeing as how all u did was find an image and give it a name[/quote'] Right then one minute i will get om you a link of a card i have made.Then will you sort of be blown out? you may rate it bad, but i prove you wrong! haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 you dont prove me wrong, i never said that u havnt made a card, i asked a question, you just took it wrong, so outta us, your the one who's 'blown out' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 you dont prove me wrong' date=' i never said that u havnt made a card, i asked a question, you just took it wrong, so outta us, your the one who's 'blown out'[/quote'] Right ok w/e so you admit it your worded it wrong i took it wrong, so what. just leave the subject now ok? We are both blown out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 haha i'm all up for dropping it, but im not blown out at all, i didn't word it wrong at all, u took it the wrong way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 haha i'm all up for dropping it' date=' but im not blown out at all, i didn't word it wrong at all, u took it the wrong way[/quote'] Oh shut-up you pathetic person just leave it for god-damn sake w/e maybe i took it wrong but for you to carry it on 'puh' just f****** leave it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 calm dude, calm, if it makes you feel any better i'll delete the posts. i only carried on because u failed too accept tht u were the one in the wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 calm dude' date=' calm, if it makes you feel any better i'll delete the posts. i only carried on because u failed too accept tht u were the one in the wrong.[/quote'] Fine w/e ill leave it, yh i got it wrong and actually you really helped me because me arguing with you helped bump up posts im now around 40 away form becoming a senior member so for that thanks, lol.Well leave it now we will be Budys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 lol guys no need to delet posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Right then so the seperates it, Azwolop, well be Buddys arguing over the internet aint going to get anybody anywhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest King of Games Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 i will attempt to rewrite the effect to the best of my knowledge of OCG: When this card is Summoned or control of this card switches, the controller of this card selects up to 2 empty Monster Card Zones on their opponent's side of the field. Until control of this card swicthes or this card is removed from the field, the selected Zones cannot be used. During the End Phase of this card's controller, he/she pays Life Points equal to the number monsters on their side of the field, times 500, if he/she does not, control of this card switches to their opponent. If control of this card did not switch during this turn's End Phase, the controller of this card can activate the following effect:-your opponent loses Life Points equal to the number of monsters on their side of the field, times 300. i think that works better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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