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THE ANGRY GERMAN KID!!!!!!


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If this card is equipped with Computer and Keyboard, destroy all monsters on your opponents field. This card cannot attack during the first turn this effect was activated. The next 5 monsters your opponent Summons get their ATK and DEF lowered by 500. If any of the monster's ATK or DEF reaches 0 by this effect, destroy that monster.

 

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agk, now fixed.

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It appears as if your Shift key is broken (you know the cute one with the arrow on it that makes letters capitalized) so I will ignore the fact that no words are capitalized, not even the card names.

 

Other then that your OCG is quite honestly not the best, and even if you try to make it more realistic made-up types is never (EVER) a good thing.

 

I'll give them 5/10, you get a bonus point for using the AGK.

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Eh, these cards are terrible the only good image is the computer and even that is bad.

 

Angry German Kid should be capitalized and so should Computer and Keyboard.

 

Equip Trap should be changed to a Continuous Trap or an Equip Spell card.

 

OCG Errors

Sacrifice = Tribute.

atk/def is always capitalized like ATK/DEF

Life Points should be capitalized.

Anything with Summon in it should be capitalized.

Any word at the start of an effect/description should be capitalized.

Any monster Type should be capitalized.

Graveyard should be capitalised.

 

There maybe more errors but these should make the cards look slightly better.

 

So for now I'll rate it 3/10

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Fix the OCG, pictures.

Equip Trap cards don't exist.

Hilarious idea though dude ! xD

For the good laugh, you get 6/10. Fix the OCG and get some good creative ideas, then head over to the Realistic Section. (:

Equip trap cards? These are Equip SPELL cards....Nice Idea.I laughed a lot at the video (lol).

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