Good? Plz Comment :D

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

[A King by Rights]

Just a Few problems

 

sacrifice = Tribute

 

one trap/spell = 1 Spell or Trap

 

other than that its a nice card except the pic doesn't really resemble a sea monster but idc a 8/10. Fixed a 9/10

[Skirts]

Picture doesn't really suit the name and it's a bit fuzzy. :/

7/10 due to the OCG error's that A King by Rights pointed out.

 

Good job !

[OmegaWave]

[align=center]Ahh...."Sacrifice"...the dub logic. I miss the good 'ol days.

 

Omega's Famous Rants

 

(OCG Fix)

"Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 WATER monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls."

 

(Ratings)

Picture: .5/2

OCG: 1/2

Balance: .5/2

Uniqueness: .5/2

 

Total: 2.5/8 = D

 

(Rants)

The typical noobie card.

 

The picture is WAY overused and to blurry to be believable.

 

I would've given you a .5/2 for OCG but I bumped it up because you're the first person i've seen use the word "Sacrifice" instead of "Tribute" in a loooooooooog time. Props to you. FYI, OCG stands for Official Card Grammar. If you're gonna post cards in the Realistic Cards section, you're gonna need to get OCG memorized atleast Semi-Perfectly.

 

I gave you a .5 for Balance because this is a very underpowered card. There is no way to Special Summon it on it's own without using several different cards like a bridge. All it is, is a 2800 beatstick with a severely underclassed effect.

 

I gave you a 0 for Uniqueness because the name isn't all that good for the card or good in general. It's a very generic and bland card that many other new designers make just because they can.

 

As I say to everyone else, PLEASE do not hesitate to send me a message for help. If you're willing to do better and learn from your mistakes, i'll gladly help you.

 

(Suggestions)

I suggest either changing the effect, or lowering the card to around Level 4, with maybe 1600 - 1800 ATK and DEF that's somewhere lower than that to match the "Tier" of the effect.

 

And that's the bottomline, because the jabroni said so![/align]

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

[align=center]Ahh...."Sacrifice"...the dub logic. I miss the good 'ol days.

 

Omega's Famous Rants

 

(OCG Fix)

"Once per turn' date=' you can Tribute 1 WATER monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls."

 

(Ratings)

Picture: .5/2

OCG: 1/2

Balance: .5/2

Uniqueness: .5/2

 

Total: 2.5/8 = D

 

(Rants)

The typical noobie card.

 

The picture is WAY overused and to blurry to be believable.

 

I would've given you a .5/2 for OCG but I bumped it up because you're the first person i've seen use the word "Sacrifice" instead of "Tribute" in a loooooooooog time. Props to you. FYI, OCG stands for Official Card Grammar. If you're gonna post cards in the Realistic Cards section, you're gonna need to get OCG memorized atleast Semi-Perfectly.

 

I gave you a .5 for Balance because this is a very underpowered card. There is no way to Special Summon it on it's own without using several different cards like a bridge. All it is, is a 2800 beatstick with a severely underclassed effect.

 

I gave you a 0 for Uniqueness because the name isn't all that good for the card or good in general. It's a very generic and bland card that many other new designers make just because they can.

 

As I say to everyone else, PLEASE do not hesitate to send me a message for help. If you're willing to do better and learn from your mistakes, i'll gladly help you.

 

(Suggestions)

I suggest either changing the effect, or lowering the card to around Level 4, with maybe 1600 - 1800 ATK and DEF that's somewhere lower than that to match the "Tier" of the effect.

 

And that's the bottomline, because the a****** said so![/align]

 

can u rate my signature card? you seem like you know what ur talking about so lets hear what youve got to say.

[Sylphiend]

Effect is good and I can see your OCG is improving.

Pics could use some more searching